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Natural killa 5 62.50%
Detrimental 3 37.50%
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Old 08-08-05, 03:42 PM   #16
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Old 08-08-05, 07:03 PM   #17
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Old 08-08-05, 10:19 PM   #18
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Old 08-09-05, 01:35 AM   #19
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Old 08-09-05, 10:07 AM   #20
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Old 08-09-05, 11:34 AM   #21
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Voted For: Natural killa

Natural Killa look like he just learnin to rap 1.
Says he's here to kill when he's never heard of a gat 2.
^^^Weak Opener
Your life is this website man you ugly as a sin
You're probably mad cuz nothin blows you but the wind
^^^No....
He's fake he just claims the cliq he's hangin with 3.
Trigga Town? ya'll aint down with the bangin shit 4.
^^^ight....
You're a hatin bitch and you wonder why we hatin you
Have to tie food to your neck so dogs play with you
^^^Wack No Punch
We can safely assume you probably think you're fresher
But takin my lyrics is the only way you'll sell a record
^^^Weak.....
You must be stupid, beating me will always be a wish
So from that your IQ must be as small as your g/f's tits
^^^Weak.....No Diss really
This battle is a prime example of how far your wishin gets
Messin with me leaves your record like the system guest's 5.
^^^Played.....
Pathetic, you'll probably dick ride if worse comes to worse
This a mans game, next time you step take off your skirt
^^^Ight Closer

i'll give him some scars and a note,while this bitch tries to be hard with a pose
and his name's death-try-mental(name),cause he's like a retard with a rope
^^^Ight Opener
so I be at your crib,perspiring you mother,while you at school,firing some butter
n your rhymes are maid as F-rest(fresh),as some aspiring butlers
^^^Ight Punch...
count on me to deliver the bomb apropos,n watch it blow,soon as ya mom looks down below
n i'm bein real when i say....what real emcee comes from "Akron,Ohio?"
^^^Good Personal....
battle a kid whose comments repatee's nerd?,and his career is conferee'd cursed?
and he ain't creative,nah,this bitch named himself after an SAT word
^^^NIce personal......
a brat behind guys,might as well hold up the sign,admit,you deliver the fries
you re-hearse(rehearse) that verse more times than a cat with 9 lives
^^^No Played
PMS'n crazily,flippin on people,in a legit paging,and no doubt,you in a pre-writ staging
but you don't really diss-guys(disguise)well,like untrained secret agents
^^^Ight Solid punch
in the middle of the night,this cat gets caught tight,and board wide
n c'mon,look at his user title,kid can't even spell "thoughts" right*
^^^Good Closer wit a personal....

V/Natural Killa......This was a one sided battle....Det came wit some basic weak punchs an His personals REally weren't good No hate Jus werk on ur Punchs an vocab.....Nk....u came wit a better verse some played lines but some good punchs mixed wit many personal's....
R>>>T>>>F............
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Old 08-09-05, 05:54 PM   #22
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Old 08-09-05, 09:30 PM   #23
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Old 08-10-05, 12:50 AM   #24
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Old 08-10-05, 06:42 PM   #25
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Old 08-10-05, 10:03 PM   #26
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Old 08-10-05, 11:06 PM   #27
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Voted For: Detrimental

Naturall killa didnt come with to many punches, the structure was fucked up,so work on dat, his rhyming was aight but didnt do him anygood, considering that the rest wasnt all that good.

Detrimental, every bar in his verse had a punch, the best one to me was But takin my lyrics is the only way you'll sell a record, his structure was good, and he made sure he rhymed

this vote goes 2 natural killa


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Old 08-11-05, 01:04 AM   #28
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Old 08-11-05, 12:05 PM   #29
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Old 08-11-05, 12:37 PM   #30
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Voted For: Detrimental

detrimental got this....

Your life is this website man you ugly as a sin
You're probably mad cuz nothin blows you but the wind

vs.

nothin


basically detrimental threw the one solid punch in this battle....natrual killa you tried to come complex, but it back fired failed attempts at wordplay, made your punches weak and not connect...you should try being more simple and just punch...also dont use stretched lines....basically detrimental gets this for throwin a good punch
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