Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio |
11-21-05, 07:11 AM | #16 | |||||||
~*This Worldz A Sin So Why Hate Me For My Habits~*
|
IP: 9600 0DE6
the intro LoL,,Good Shit Rhymez Is Nice Everything was on point,The beat was okay nothin ammusin,,flow was pretty good,Your emotion was good also what more uw ana hear man dope drop ! nice keepit comin
~1~ RTF on "Not a Place to be"(ghost)
__________________
"This Worlds A Sin So Why Hate Me For My Habits"-Gh0st-
|
|||||||
11-21-05, 07:16 AM | #17 | |||||||
ILL GRAMMATIX... any other questions?
|
IP: AB81 1777
aiight....good lookin out g-money....if you got links drop 'em... me and willa will return da favors as soon as we can...werd... and while ya at it.... go check out da audio battles and vote on those... kats is sleeping big time... show some support and kats will return da favors....werd
__________________
CLICK DA SIGGY "real recognize real but still others remain jaded believing bullshit accounts of how "so-and-so" made it there's a formula for gimmick emcees that are over-rated: wackness created... payola paid it... and radio overplayed it" |
|||||||
11-21-05, 07:26 AM | #18 | |||||||
~*This Worldz A Sin So Why Hate Me For My Habits~*
|
IP: 9600 0DE6
__________________
"This Worlds A Sin So Why Hate Me For My Habits"-Gh0st-
|
|||||||
11-21-05, 08:49 AM | #19 | ||||
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
|
IP: BF56 CF93
alright im going to hit up shit for all of u when i get home go vote featured if u like it thanx
__________________
O.Y.D. |
||||
11-21-05, 06:02 PM | #20 | ||||
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
|
IP: 4453 3712
past tense
http://community.rapverse.com/showp...238&postcount=6 ike http://community.rapverse.com/showp...41&postcount=11 kryo ummmm that link never loaded cause i have ghettop internet lol : / so get me a real link and ill return it ghost http://community.rapverse.com/showp...243&postcount=3 alright thank for the feed listen to all the tracks and vote and ill hit up 2 more links
__________________
O.Y.D. |
||||
11-21-05, 06:30 PM | #21 | |||||||
New to RV
|
IP: DCF5 BA5F
this shit is pretty nice...ive heard this beat somewhere...i just dont know where off the top of my head lol, this flow is pretty sick man....but the delivery isnt that good...the shit behind you rapping im not really feeling it man...but the lyrics are pretty good man, and the overall flow of yoru verse is sick man....alright beat....that intro is funny as hell man....
nice drop man....keep that shit coming man... return the favor when i drop my track on the tthread |
|||||||
11-21-05, 06:32 PM | #22 | ||||
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
|
IP: 4453 3712
ummm yea no thanx next time you should listen to the whole track cause theres 2 ppl on the trck lol
__________________
O.Y.D. |
||||
11-21-05, 06:56 PM | #23 | |||||||
New to RV
|
IP: DCF5 BA5F
i did listen to the whhole thing lol...all of you did your damn thing...nice flow and delivery on all that shit man..the second one was differnt but i liked it and the lyrics were straight man...im not a dumb ass i just forgot to type up what i thought lol..and the link is
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=215225 |
|||||||
11-21-05, 09:53 PM | #24 | |||||
Maggot
|
IP: F11D 501C
wtf at intro lol beat ok waiting to see waht u do with this intro lol
alrite chorus is good love how you used the same instrumental/ idea to 1 little indian and flipped it into something dope props on that ill flow was on point emotion was really good alot of basketball lines i was liking it love the mj line some of the best shit ive heard from you damn again im loving the chorus mad creative willa props on this flow was pretty much on point emotion wise you've gotten so much better lyrics there were som funny lines the strap on line roflmao wear a strap on and cum with less balls then me this was the best ive heard from you props overall i was loving this track only thing that needs to be improved is quality and the length id like to hear a remix
__________________
A.I.
Dont Battle Us..Cuz You Will Lose .
. |
|||||
11-21-05, 10:21 PM | #25 | ||||
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
|
IP: 3508 3A5F
alright thank you ill go look for some of ur shit to rtf
__________________
O.Y.D. |
||||
11-22-05, 06:17 AM | #26 | |||||||||
...Belong...
|
IP: 3BEC 2E75
Listened yesterday...here's my feed
<)-(>...nice flow on this was feeling ya verse as a whole quality let ya down BUT it was better than usual i'd say hook was nice middle part of ya verse was cool where you went all out rhyming...all in all good verse but willa flow was very stop start and i wasn't really feeling the effects though...Ill G had the better verse quality was weakness in the track but meh...good 1st half but willa was average flow was her weak point keep droppin
__________________
Quote:
^ Amen Brother ^
Quote:
R.I.P OMB |
|||||||||
11-22-05, 04:46 PM | #27 | |||||||
Tha 1st member of S.W.A
|
IP: 5350 A834
lmao @ tha shit at tha begginin, reminds me of turban
both have good flow n quality lol @ tha simpsons thang at tha end. hook iz nice beat iz koo i know sum ppl might think tha quality wuzznt that good, but i thought it wuz aight, good shit, werd
__________________
R.I.P. EAZY-E MoBB Squad
REST IN PEACE MY MUTHAPHUKKIN SPICCA OMB!!!
|
|||||||
11-23-05, 01:45 AM | #28 | ||||
Fuck Parents
|
IP: 28AD 5545
wtf? at the damn intro, yal some wild ass people
who the fuck is <]-[>? w/e he's dope as fuck. im lovin the hook. dude killed the beat. the echo may be a lil too much though. it sounds good to a certain point but after a while it kinda gets on my nerves, it's too strong i think. meh, lyrics are decent, im lovin this kid's delivery, presence is good as well....now willa, hmmmm.......girl i love ya voice, ima say it again you sound slam like trina. you need to fix the delay though, it sounds like your too far away from the mic.....ya flow is sexy, i really did not think you'd do good on this beat but you proved me wrong. you kinda slowed it down a lil bit, in a good way though. likin the multies, the delivery is nice, presence could be better. you sound black, i still cant believe your white lmao good enough feed for you willa?
__________________
CS
....for life |
||||
11-23-05, 05:01 AM | #29 | |||||||
Vendetta the K.O. King
|
IP: 81D9 FAB1
boo @ the indians intro... you'd hate to see a native hand you your ass in audio wouldn't you... The rest of the track is decent. Audio quality sounds like you spittin thru a tin can... hook is aight... Flow is aiight on first verse. Crossed over like Iverson line was aight. Will appears verse is good. Quality still ass, but I don't remember her flowin this good before. Some elevation happenin word. Broken down like Patrick Ewings knees line was gold LOL. sheeeeit.... yea - track was ok... word.
1
__________________
|
|||||||
11-23-05, 02:11 PM | #30 | ||||
Champion
|
IP: 6F18 1362
iite peepin...lmfao at the intro...lol...hook is pretty nice...LV..listenin to ure bit...flow is hot...quality is ok...underground shit...real solid...lyrics are hot...lol at the hook again..but this is hot...aiite wil a peer...quality is good...voice is good for a female for a rapper..coolade line is dope...this shit is impressive...flow is hot....i liked this track..8/10..hlla atca nigga..one
__________________
www.soundclick.com/dollaback
|
||||
Thread Tools | Search this Thread |
Display Modes | |
|
|