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10:23 till i'm 86
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didn't seem like u lead into the song too good... chorus would be good if u did cooler mixing to it. like the second verse. but aint really catchin everything u sayin... chorus sounds better later in the song, but the finish seems odd how u continued over the beat. anyway decent, u sound similare to the last dude on my track
rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240242
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