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02-24-07, 05:57 PM
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10:23 till i'm 86
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Big Pictue, J-con, Detalz- 45 to tsg
IP: D22F CD29
chorus all three.
big picture- first half of first verse jcon- second half of first verse after that u know who's who last verse and last chorus is detailz chours about the two places we live at at college http://www.soundclick.com/util/down...&key=23145A01-9 ^^ the song^^^ the tracks of left feed onVVVV http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240106 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240239
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Big Pic- Whore of the World ( youtube video)  Jesus saves, even from paranoia myspace.com/marktimothyschafer my reverbnation.com page Last edited by Big Picture : 02-24-07 at 06:01 PM. |
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02-25-07, 11:19 AM
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I'm Talented.Period.
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IP: 9B2C 9A4D
vocals are not centered correctly...sound panned right...
also, the vocals are muffled...not crisp at all hook...fits...but it isn't saying much Verse...flow is good, if not standard...not bad lyrics...decent at best this sounds like an amateur rapping... elevation is needed not totally wack...but, ur talkin bout bullet holes in faces...nothing new about your spin on it...and ur deliveries are all average 1 |
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