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11-22-04, 05:47 PM
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IP: 3240 794D
damnit nigga..you beat my open mic..I admit it..
Bla..I'ma make one to beat this... it was sick man.nothin wrong with it..AT all..damn.. 10/10 hoe
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11-22-04, 05:51 PM
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IP: 3240 794D
go look at my "not you" no link sorry
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11-22-04, 06:15 PM
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IP: FEFC E273
imagery was great................flow was on point and structure was also damn good........i really like tha vocab and emotion.....i really liked how you stayed on topic.......most cats get off point...........this was a very good drop
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11-22-04, 06:27 PM
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IP: E3CA 7CA2
nice drop fam....thats def the Open mic of the month of nov. even though its the first one ive read of this site...it was good...very good..
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11-22-04, 07:40 PM
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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: E63C BFED
This was pretty good. I dunno if its just me, but I sort of got an image in my head of a rich beverly hills type beachside community and a man parked outside in an expensive sports car fuming about losing his ex wife..
It was really good how you started on your topic from a very early part of the peice with this line: "Constantly parked parallel to entrance of house in question…" As soon as I read that, I knew exactly what this whole thing was about. And its probably what kept me interested throughout the rest of the peice. Good shit bro.. |
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11-22-04, 10:20 PM
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IP: 4185 68F3
wow, this is unbelievably good, like your imagery man, and yea poet ^, i kinda got the same idea, the imagery wow, that was just great, i swear, if we we're in a topical battle, you would of killed me! lol, but yea, the vocab was excellent, n multi's needed at all, that actually would of ruined it. I'm very impressed, thanx to this O.M., people will show the capability of what our crew can do!
 , 9.8/10 much prop's!! Damn, now i got competition *signs off, goes to notebook, thinks of what to write even better* 
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11-23-04, 02:34 AM
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IP: 278A 380E
lol
thx .......................................... uppin
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11-23-04, 12:25 PM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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IP: 2E7E 4D00
Damn Prem...
Nice Emotion ThroughOut...Good Use of Vocabulary and The Rhyme Scheme Was Nice. This Is Probably The Best Open Mic I've Read (Well Except For Mine :-D lol) Tight Shit Man...Keep It Up... ~R~ |
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11-23-04, 12:29 PM
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IP: E3CA 7CA2
Lovin it mayne, this is tha most touching poem...*tear* *sniff*, lost myself 4 a minute, ne wayz, good use of imagery!!! Very creative and your last line was 1 of tha best closers I seen on an OM. Keep it up bro, true potential!
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11-23-04, 03:02 PM
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IP: 3240 794D
I Was Feeling This Piece...
The Emotion And Content Were All There... And The Piece Had A Nice Smooth Flow That Alway Stayed Constant... I Always Said You Would Be Able To Be A Nice Topical Head... Oviously While I Was Gone You Made The Leap To Do Just That... Very Nice Piece Overall With Really No Flaws... Only Thing I Could Complain About Is Its Length... But It's The Second Half Of Your Other Piece So When Together Its Prolly Right... Big Up Mayn, I Like What You're Doing... .One. |
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11-23-04, 04:42 PM
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IP: 183F 8D72
GIVE HIM THE OPEN MIC AWARD GODDAMNIT... HE DESERVES IT YOU STINGY BASTARDS.. ROFL well he does.. uppin' this nice piece of work...
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11-24-04, 02:46 PM
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IP: AB6E C561
uppin
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11-24-04, 02:51 PM
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RV SPOTLIGHT, GET AT ME!
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IP: 80EF 45DD
Dope piece one of the better open mics ive read in awhile. Reminds me of a piece i didn in a topical tourney, nice emotion, feeling it..............
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11-25-04, 01:47 PM
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Out-Spoken
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IP: AF76 A123
besides my own...and b.i detained...and nostra.....this is the dopest open mic i've seen in a while...imagery was definately there....emotion was as on point as it could have possibly been....and a very well told story and ending...this definately has my vote for OM of the month
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11-25-04, 05:16 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
this was dope...8.6/10...very dope good vocab and wordplay...tightness..weerdizzle...drop feed on me and indephes collab link in the sig
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