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01-13-04, 05:10 PM
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IP: 7AF3 56A5
Flow: Tie
Punch: LM Meta: LM Structure: LM Personal: LM Enjoy: LM Vote: LM LM hit harder..nice structure..Jae work on punchs..youl get there good battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106225 hit that up please...1 more vote needed |
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01-13-04, 05:59 PM
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J.R. - You had an alright flow, it was consistant and didnt really seem to fall off. You had punches that had a start, but no finishing effect. Maybe work on the effectiveness of your punches. The structure was choppy, but didnt interfear with the rhyme scheme. It was an ok verse, but I dont think your punches were fully brought.
LM - You had very nice structure, and the flow was pretty good. You added some personals in there, havent seen you do that befor. You had some pretty good punches, but the others wernt as effective. The rhyme scheme was simplistic. The structure made up for that though... You also had some meta's that stood out, nice work on that... Vote = LM ( Pretty good battle, but LM took it. Keep elevating J.R. )
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01-14-04, 04:08 AM
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Uppin for votes (3)............................................... .....
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01-14-04, 08:24 AM
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Uppin for votes (4)............................................... ................
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01-14-04, 10:07 AM
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IP: D70D A460
your flow were not feelin, like ya legs, in the chair u wheel,
^Best Punch of the whole battle right thurr^ So, my vote goes to Jae Hey, can ya'll folk vote on my battle?? It's been up fa like 3 or 4 dayz or some shit. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...304#post1087304 |
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01-14-04, 11:01 AM
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Drop Of Genius
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IP: 6B67 D4F4
^^Read the verses again and think bout what you just posted....I think you've got a bit tangled, that wasnt one of my lines
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01-14-04, 11:03 AM
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Drop Of Genius
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IP: 6B67 D4F4
Actually it was me who got a bit tangled....I read your post wrong. My bad dawg. Sorry bout the freepost
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01-14-04, 11:18 AM
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ROC- you stuff was decent it seemed to flow pretty good, you had a few punches in there but nothing major an some nice vocab at times. But you gotta learn to throw punches an use meta's.
LM- You verse was pretty nice, it had alot of punches in there an personals an all that shit and was pretty creative OVERALL- LM took this cause he had the punches Take some time an drop a vote in my battle thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106542 Good Battle Guys |
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01-14-04, 11:19 AM
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Aight battle....
LM i've seen you come way harder.... But ya personals...and punches got this You also had better flow..and nice structure Jae...elevate...well both of you could so v/LM Return tha favor..hit this up with an honest vote..thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106705 |
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