Originally Posted by MaNiPuLaTiOn

aiight long verses.this gonna b a BIG breakdown.......lol

ONE MAN BAND
Eyes on my list of prone hits, left alone roaming homeless
leave ya hopeless when ya bone rips from stone bits to make ya dome split
GUD MULTIS.....7/10
I was told to go spit, with eye, I rock and now Ill boast shit
E's roasted, called me out cos hes got a verse prepared n ghostwrit
MULTIES HOT...OK PUNCH 7/10
Well cmon then, bitch, lets hear what you been saving
ya wack crews deflating, so this dudes been craving to have his outline glued to pavement
SORRY BUT I DIDNT GET THE PUNCH,MULTIES HOT THOUGH 6/10
thats a true arrangement, so when ya do get the chance to diss me
after our fists meet, ill split cheeks.. slittin till this bitch is sittin with pissed briefs
HA..LIKE IT,NOT A REAL HARD PUNCH BUT FUNNY 7/10
oh no, this homo's gon say I got no flow, when his own show goes so slow
tryin'a get an identity, ya low bro, might as well just go home, ya no show
OK...6/10
eye, flow? please.. i'll explode holes in ya knees and ya arm, rooky'll get beat in a bar
I release these 3 piece BB's at ya species, cos face it man, no way your defeatin a star
AGAIN OK...6/10
band be leavin a scar, and soon youll see this fag kissin my belt
Id say that eye bit my style.. but shit, id just be dissin myself
YEH...CUD BEEB BETA SET UP..BUT FUNNY...7/10
and thats a straight diss that ya felt, cos with a bit verse, you're happy
no more callin him gay, cos last time i did he grabbed his purse n' slapped me
HMM.DNT LIKE GAY LINES 5/10
band'll spray clips to this gay bitch's anus till his brain splits to eight bits
bringin great spits to bake kids, shit eye, if you representin fakeness, you aced it
OK.AGAIN NEEDS MORE PERSONALS..6/10
my policies beamin, I make 'hits on the street' give you an 'ecology beating'
impress me bitch.. you a "sorry excuse" like an "apology sneezing"
OK....7/10
get broke apart - admit it eye - I 'stream lines'.. my 'flow is art'
RAIN as multi king, i DICTATE the FLOOD like 'napoleon bonaparte' on NOAHS ARK
NICE WORDPLAY,DECENT PUNCH..7/10
chrome the shark, ripped with one pass, kids "square" is "smaller" than "hitlers moustache"
one fact: all ya punches are "washed up and old" like senior citizens "sponge baths"
HAHA...ORIGINALITY..8/10
don't get it? of course not, you're a dumb fuck, with numb nuts
can't say that sperm lines are played.. when ya throats clogged, cuz my cum's stuck
OK..6/10
I aint gonna quit, I havent even started yet, n' you already feel the pain
ill explain, your verse and my old shit are about to be revealed the same
WEAK.5/10
400 posts n' you still not crazy mad, so get off ya ass, dont be lazy man
verses are clones of mine when i began.. this aint eye, hes just baby band
HMM U FALLIN OFF NOW 5/10
bangin ya verse, my flow and punches so hot, eye could be good, but hes lackin the thirst
Only reason ya record aint shit and you ever won a battle is cos you hang with the worst
OK CLOSER 7/10

OVERALL...105/160....GREAT MULTIS.....GUD FLOW/STRUCTURE
I THINK U LACK PERSONALS...THINK U SHOULD CONCENTREATE ON PUNCHES RATHER THAN MULTIES
COZ YOUR FLOWS GREAT..BUT THE PUNCHES LET IT DOWN....SLIGHTLY


EYE DENTY
Believe how I'll make U heed these words/
U couldnt fuck wit capitol, so insted U copied and paste his verse/
OK.6/10
Im artistic as hell, thats why U hate this earth/
one man took extasy wit himself, now he's a band of nerds?/
DNT GET IT 5/10
U should take Ur self out since U trying to banned all herbs/
U ubsurd if U think my word is not heard by gods and Goliaths alike/
DIDNT RHYME...??4/10..REALLY IT DOSENT MAKE SENSE EITHER?
Ur band ubserves while U get served and hurt in lyrical street fights/
I'll make ur infamy stop going unquestioned and cut sections out ur small intestants/
OK..6/10
can anybody help em wit his comfused ryme style, cuz He's taking suggestions/
U aint even worth honerable mention, he use to Be in my crew too, death is full of deception/
OK 6/10
Viewer Disgretion got U leaking spit rather then blood/
even when U had 200 posts, U still werent half this good/
BETA...7/10
I'll take everything U own, I'll have U tightly consealing Ur guts/
U talk tough, but nothings healing these cuts/
OK..AGAIN NOT VERY HARD..6/10
got Ur body bruised and abused from a thousand stab wounds/
got Ur mom knocking on the door while U try to whipe the blood out the floor of Ur bathroom/
DOSENT RHYME.FAIRLY WEAK..5/10
cuz real rappers dont tolerate U, Ur fake game is played out/
Im whipping Ur body against the walls like a rubber play house/
HMM..CUD B SET UP BETA.7/10
I'v beaten hundreds of niggaz, so 6 in one gets easily layed out/
Im a do like an audio diss track, and let Ur fagget ass just fade out/
YEH.ORIGINAL.7/10
to tell U the truth, I havent red Ur verse yet, Its long ass fuck and I saw U cut it into sections too, I must be popular these days.LOL, Im read it right
^^^IS THIS PART OF UR VERSE?COZ IT DNT RHYME?
I`LL LEAVE IT OUT ANYWAY
now tho. lets get
OVERALL 59/100....59%....
OK....SUM OF YOUR VERSES DIDNT RHYME....
FLOWS NICE,YET SIMPLE
OVERALL....IF UD HVE HAD A FEW HARDER PUNCHES.U MAY HVE SCRAPPED THE WIN..........JUS CUM HARDER

VOTE..one-man-band