Thought this was a nice battle..This how i seen it

Poetic bout to get his whole-neck-slit from the apple to the throats pit/
You wish you were "Poetic Justice", so you could be fuckin on "Pac's" dick/

Not really a good concept to go with..been done loads of times..4/10

Poetic Justice, wanna bust this? what's that? Your edits-boring em?/
Thats because this is the battle arena, not the Poetry forum/click here bitch

Tha was ok personal..could of been presented much better though..5/10

Justice has been served, got his asskicked like a poetic skank/
Blasted your plastered casket underwater with no ceptic tank/

This was decent in my opnion..witty concept..liked this 7/10

This Janet Jackson wannabe got stabbed in front of me through your scab to your scar/
Got you running in squared circles like you was your Avatar/

Decent again like this to..punch hit hard 7/10

I'll split you apart like an unlit cigar like I'm making a joint/
Your six points under par, under my car like periods under exclamation points!/

Wasnt feeling that..2nd line of this bar was mad streched..punch was weak 4/10

Im Max Hardcore, Your my bitch gettin pissed & shit on with sick shit! You know you love it!/
You claim your hard but your soft like bisquit, now thats Poetic Justice/

Didnt even rhyme..set up was ok..but the punch let u down on this bar..3/10

There was flashes of good potential in this verse..but it was blowing hot and cold throughout!..Use of wordplay was ok but needed to come harder..some personals made me laugh..like the avatar punch..flow was aight till the last..vocab ok..structure fell off a couple times..overall an ok verse..




this a "goodbar"..coz ur first "punch" left u incappable...
dropin ya gay shit here..jus opened ya ass up..left u rapeable

Was ok..was a bit played to..wordplay was ok to..5/10

ur sigs 2 big 4 ya..if ya brain woz chocolate it wouldnt fill an m&m
try again...if i try stand close enough to him i can hear the ocean

ok again..flow off but still came off ok..5/10

type of nigga that cut himself with a pen.....jus cos it say "bic"
only cat that would be happy wit cancer cos he can then claim to be "sick"

Na..wasnt feeling that..concept of a deadly disease to call them selves sick is used often and i consider it played..3/10

checked your sig...ya balls dropped..thats real great ya
so u had sex.....thats gud...now all u need is a partner

set up was ok..let down by the unoriginal punch though..4/10

i finished wit this newb..smashin his teeth like obie trice....
....u need re-incarnatn now....
anyone who told u to be urself..cudnt hve given u worse advice

Ok..again wasnt great..littered with spelling mistakes though! 4.5/10

Was also an ok drop..i'll say the same for you as your opponent really..blowed hot and cold..potiental also..come to think of it this was an even par..battle similar mistakes as your opponent..structure falling off sumtimes and also flow did once or twice..typos aswell..best bar i though was the first one

This was a very close battle..But i go with Goodbar..he had 2 decent personals in this which clinched it really..in every other department it was even

v/ Good bar..no hate poetic..just the way i saw it..can u both plz return da favour in my battles..links providing underneath my sig..pz

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