all ma stuff rhymed..i had better word play...u only had tha 1 with sea-men...u just need ta elavate ur vocab...
im gona take this battle..only way u gon win is if noobes vote like tha 1 who just did

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uppin,hey i thought we had a vote each,wtf happened!......................

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Voted For: THUGZY

Structure - Thugzy, he had straight lines that weren't as stretched as prod..

Punchlines - Thgzy, I was feeling his lines better, like the one about sea-men, that was tight..

personals, none stuck out, both of you can elevate there..

Flow, about a tie, it flowed pretty well on both sides..

Overall, I give it to thugzy for better punches and structure, everything else was about a tie, but thugzy took it in the end..

return the favor with a drop in my thread, thanx..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143024

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Voted For: Da Prodigy

This goes to Prodigy, I felt he had stronger puches, and a few nice personals in there to take the win...Thugzy ya verse was decent, but you tried to be too gansta wit all the "i'll leave you filled wit holes" shit, that shit is way played... for example ya first 4 lines were like this, you had decent lines but just seemed like you was bein repetative wit all the thug shit... Prod ya punches hit hard, at first ya struc was off and you started off slow, but you really picked up, the David Blaine line was dope, really hit hard.. I felt you had better wordplay, you were more witty in my mind....

Overall vote goes to Prodigy, a more witty verse and harder punches

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Voted For: Da Prodigy

Thugzy- Some Ok Lines, Punches Were Ok, Structure Was Good, Flow as Ok, And Had A Metaphor Here And There

Da Prod- Punches Hit Harder, Wordplay Was Ok, Structure Was Ok, And Flow Was IGht

Punches- Da Prod
Flow- Thugzy
Wordplay- Da Prod
Metaphors- Thugzy
Originality- Da Prod
Structure- Thugzy

Final Vote- Da Prod

[b] Return Favor With Honest Vote:
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=142469

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Voted For: Da Prodigy

ok:
thugzy:you had nice flow and structure, your punches were good, but i dont think you came as strong as da prodigy,it was decent though,
da prodigy: you had a nice verse here with good punches and wordplay, i liked the elvis, king line, that was good, and i liked your closer as well,
vote:da prodigy for strong wordplay and punches


drop a vote in my battle: fluidmoon vs magic in frontlines,thx

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