word....thanks for the feed..........

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beat is pretty cool.....laid back. I think your vocals could be raised a little on the chorus in the beginning......maybe your vocals throughout as well. Your flow is nice for the beat but you seem to sound a little mechanical. Try to just let it flow a little and not try to chop every syllable. Just pronounce the syllables. It really doesn't sound that bad with this song though. Your vocals sound a little too highpitched for this beat too.......maybe a little too soft. You start to lose your flow a little in the third verse too......I feel where you were taking this song, but you should have ended the song with the chorus again or maybe just fade the beat out a little......anyway, the song was pretty good overall, just needs a little polishing ™

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the beat is very nice... n laid back..

your flow is very nice on hear.. the lyrics is nice.. and the delivery is good.. but i could you could do way better.. but yeah.. everything is good.. but for the chorus.. i aint sure if u even put the chorus? did U? lol.. cuz its hard to tell... so if u did make that stand out more lol.. but yo try to change ur rhyme scheme every now and than cuz it all sounds the same man.. n makes it less-interesting.. overall higher than average.. n good since quality is good unlike me..

ovearall: 7/10

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=198510

rtf plz

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uppin........................

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