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chrit 5 83.33%
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Old 12-28-03, 10:28 AM   #16
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Chrit
Kid I've never heard of... no question that he's wack...
Told Tox to stick to what he knows...
aiight set up

...Now nothing is holding him back
Known to all on RB.. thats right Chrit is nice...
nothin special

Made a name for yourself too... then chose a password and typed it twice
huh, a personal?? i dont get it

Shit... RM is worthless... proving this kid is nothing to handle...
And from the way the crowd goes electric from sonning you...
aiight, not too good

...I'd swear you were a solar panel
Fat arrogant bitch... Its fitting your about to get clowned in text...
lol, aiight

So damned obese I'd swear Tox could wear the food chain around his necks...
aiight wordplay

Leave kids head with bumps rivaling a blind kids report card...
Kid must be great at golf the way he's always sub-par...
nice punch, with good wordplay




Tox
Im facing legendary chrit, & and apparently the best..
ßHe quoted a status on the left, & left me to take a guess.
aiight

Your ful of yourself kid, & Known fact…Your ruthless..
Laim as fuck your not my level…
not good

But cmon now who is?
^Truth is no1...& and stop with the chrit for supermods
blah

With laim responses like hi kids, prove’s you need tutor - God*
He’s Fake, No mistake… Rb Really Cant You See?
aiight setup

This muthafucka just two wins away from being a Brooklyn…wannabe.
aiight punch

Who rated you? Your weak & thats why you no-showed the league….
Moan and pleed…& try and beat me but really chrit there’s.... no need.
nice punch

So read…chrit’s still sucking dick Ye n I‘ll….Reload this..
he can never mod my site again..eh<---quoted by Cprogress
ROFL, i know why he will never mod the site again





aiight
Chrit
i expected a lot better,
you had some good
wordplayan vocab,
but a lot of filler lines.


tox
you only snatched it with the punches,
you also didnt come as hard as i expected,
you also had an aiight personal or 2[/b]


overall TOX


plz drop an honest vote on this battle
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Old 12-28-03, 12:11 PM   #17
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the fuck?

you cant be serious can you?


 
Old 12-28-03, 12:15 PM   #18
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LMMFAO...
You know you're an herb when not only can u not write a verse.. you also can't read or comprehend one.

Anyways..

Tox.. Your punches didn't connect to hard and you had basically an overall simple verse.. Nothing special.. Nothing clever.. Just your good old plain verse.

Chrit on the other hand had some nice metaphores.. good concepts, although could have been re-worded.. Hard hitting punches.. Only thing is you seemed to have forced it a bit and too many fillers.. The first line of every bar except 1 was filler.

But nonetheless.. Chrit came harder in all aspects of this battle.

Vote- Chrit.
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Old 12-28-03, 12:16 PM   #19
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^yeh i understand you chrit is cool... = /

CD That was cleary a hate n00b be looking out in audio.. too for my latest drop.
 
Old 12-28-03, 12:55 PM   #20
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Kid I've never heard of... no question that he's wack...
Told Tox to stick to what he knows...
aiight set up

...Now nothing is holding him back
Known to all on RB.. thats right Chrit is nice...
nothin special

Made a name for yourself too... then chose a password and typed it twice
huh, a personal?? i dont get it

^^^
You didnt even break the bars down right

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Old 12-28-03, 03:26 PM   #21
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tech-chrit
wordplay-tie
meta's-chrit
pers-tox
struc-tie
punch-tox
enjoy-tox

overall Tox

Good battle from the both of you. (yeah right)
I give the battle to tox for actually trying a lil bit.
 
Old 12-28-03, 04:06 PM   #22
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3-1
Would anyone I've heard fo want to vote>?


 
Old 12-28-03, 04:12 PM   #23
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i even beat that kid aragon i thought he was going to hate vote.
anyway it 3-2 he dint poll but who caresss says 3-1 Good Drop.
 
Old 12-28-03, 05:01 PM   #24
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wait im always seen Tox run his mouth about how every one is wack in text .. i was like damn this kid must be ill .. wow was I wrong .. ur shit was terribal .. not starting beef but u really shouldnt run around actin like u ill .. cause that was pretty shitty!

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Old 12-28-03, 05:21 PM   #25
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word i dont even try in my battles here, and the 2 battles ive posted here would shit all over you, so someone be talking shit they cant back up...
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Old 12-28-03, 05:24 PM   #26
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wait im always seen Tox run his mouth about how every one is wack in text .. i was like damn this kid must be ill .. wow was I wrong .. ur shit was terribal .. not starting beef but u really shouldnt run around actin like u ill .. cause that was pretty shitty!

pz

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Old 12-28-03, 06:11 PM   #27
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Yo,
Ok i'm new here and all. I mean this is my first time being on this site, I stay strickly the small nderground boreds, but back to the point. I heard these people on this site were Insanly good, and if this is what you guys call a legend then I'm god, nothing personal, but that shit sucked, you have to be able to come harder then that? at least I hope so, if thats what I got in store for me, I'm leaving this site, Garth Brooks has more rapping ability then that. Please tell me you guys are just screwing around, and not coming hard, PLEASE


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Old 12-28-03, 07:24 PM   #28
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^

And you are who?

Nevermind....

...I honestly dont care
 
Old 12-29-03, 03:53 AM   #29
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Both verses were weak for what they are capable of. I know you guys are rusty, especially chrit for being gon so long. Im not ganna vote, but im ganna put my thoughts in on it...
( cause im in a crew with Tox )

Tox -I felt your punches were being thrown, but not making the final impact that your capable of causing. You had an akward ryme scheme, and I like that alot. Not very many people change there rhyme scheme up anymore. You had some personals in there, but could have been worded better. It was a pretty good verse, it just doesnt seem like much. Only because I have seen so much better from you. I know your skill hommie
ohh yea, and I liked the word play you brought towards the end.

Chrit - Same thing with you chrit, the punches were thrown, but there wasnt the full blow. Even though there were, I think, two punches I liked in there. One of them was the closer, that was witty. You both had good vocab for a battle. Not to much and not to little. I also liked how you used your reputation to your advantage. I wasnt really feeling the verse, but you know why. I have seen alot better from you. But it was an exceptional drop. I hope you get your skill hot soon hommie...

Vote - Chrit

Conclusion
I felt chrit came harder with the punches, and he had a little more creatiity going on in there. It was an alright battle, but you both can do so much better. Its nice to see chrit battleing again. So thats cool, umm... You both had good rhyme schemes, and vocab. But chrit just had harder punches, and thats what wins battles. Rhyme schemes, vocab, all of that shit doesnt win battles. the punhes and personals matter, and thats a fact.
Well, G/L to both of you in the battle. I was doing this to up your battle a little. Good drop from both of you...
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Old 12-29-03, 04:29 PM   #30
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3-1

Two more votes.

People... just get this over with....

Tired of this sleeping shit.


 
 


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