Yo Yu u forgot to poll vote on my battle wit Ill Fresh man do it so It can close allready lol...........~1~....................

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FLOW=DUCE
STRUCTURE=DUCE
PERSONALS=DUCE
PUNCHES=BOTH
CREATIVETY=DUCE
MULTIS=YIN SUN
ENTERTAINMENT=THE WHOLE BATTLE WAS FUNNY
AGRESSION=DUCE
VOTE=DUCE
I WILL VOTE WHEN I AM AT 100
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VOTE MINES..I VOTE YOURS...J GOODZ VS. FREEMAN

Yu Bin SunD - Wasnt that good of a verse. The punches were thrown, but never made full contact. I liked the fact that you attempted to put personals in there. Also there is a punch in there I really like, the monkey barz line... Not a great verse, could have been worded better and more creative...

The Duce - You had a pretty weak verse also. The punches were thrown and didnt make full contact either. It would have been a better choice to throw some personals in there. Those are a huge part of battles. They can make a nice impact on your opponent. The verse was just to simple, keep elevating hommie.

Vote - Yu Bin SunD

Conclusion - His personals got this battle. He had a little more effect with a witty punch in there. A weak battle, but there is an obvious winner here. Keep it up hommies...

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Return the favor please and make an honest vote on the battle between me and Chrit in my sig. It would be much appriciated. Remember I took my time to make this vote, please do the same.

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Closer battle than fucken another battle that was fucken REAL CLOSE.
The Duce took it, hes good, good flow, good punches, ha "should i just unzip my fly" that line was good, rhymed and flowed good about the whole jackson thing though alot of others use that theme he pulled it off well
Sund u had some good stuff too, "serve this kat faster than a vietnamese restaurant" honestly though its more so the koreans that fancy that shit, from what i hear......anyway
Opener----TIe
closer----Duce
punches----Duce
overall----Duce
Close but good battle NOT A HATE VOTE.....Just dealing with the facts please hit up mine its getting slept on
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102450

breakdown

punches y: I'll Rape This Ass..And He Responded But Dawg I'm Already Soar..
I'm 17..I Respect My Elders But Not This Broke Male Pussy Dats 24..(his age
metas y: Like Spillin Cement Buckets..I Dump This Hard..
multies duce: Thermosetting Compositions.... and you wonder tha reaction//
why do 6 year olds look at you wit physical attraction//
wow Yu Bin SunD-ly rub'd into satifaction...you a Jackson?//
personals y: I'm 17..I Respect My Elders But Not This Broke Male Pussy Dats 24..(his age)
flow both: both verses were good and wasnt stretched that much
consistancy both: both continued to diss eachother throughout
overall y: i gotta go with yu bin sund no hate

both peep some links in my sig please

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Huh china.

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