Yo Yu u forgot to poll vote on my battle wit Ill Fresh man do it so It can close allready lol...........~1~....................

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FLOW=DUCE
STRUCTURE=DUCE
PERSONALS=DUCE
PUNCHES=BOTH
CREATIVETY=DUCE
MULTIS=YIN SUN
ENTERTAINMENT=THE WHOLE BATTLE WAS FUNNY
AGRESSION=DUCE
VOTE=DUCE
I WILL VOTE WHEN I AM AT 100
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VOTE MINES..I VOTE YOURS...J GOODZ VS. FREEMAN

Yu Bin SunD - Wasnt that good of a verse. The punches were thrown, but never made full contact. I liked the fact that you attempted to put personals in there. Also there is a punch in there I really like, the monkey barz line... Not a great verse, could have been worded better and more creative...

The Duce - You had a pretty weak verse also. The punches were thrown and didnt make full contact either. It would have been a better choice to throw some personals in there. Those are a huge part of battles. They can make a nice impact on your opponent. The verse was just to simple, keep elevating hommie.

Vote - Yu Bin SunD

Conclusion - His personals got this battle. He had a little more effect with a witty punch in there. A weak battle, but there is an obvious winner here. Keep it up hommies...

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Return the favor please and make an honest vote on the battle between me and Chrit in my sig. It would be much appriciated. Remember I took my time to make this vote, please do the same.

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Closer battle than fucken another battle that was fucken REAL CLOSE.
The Duce took it, hes good, good flow, good punches, ha "should i just unzip my fly" that line was good, rhymed and flowed good about the whole jackson thing though alot of others use that theme he pulled it off well
Sund u had some good stuff too, "serve this kat faster than a vietnamese restaurant" honestly though its more so the koreans that fancy that shit, from what i hear......anyway
Opener----TIe
closer----Duce
punches----Duce
overall----Duce
Close but good battle NOT A HATE VOTE.....Just dealing with the facts please hit up mine its getting slept on
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102450

breakdown

punches y: I'll Rape This Ass..And He Responded But Dawg I'm Already Soar..
I'm 17..I Respect My Elders But Not This Broke Male Pussy Dats 24..(his age
metas y: Like Spillin Cement Buckets..I Dump This Hard..
multies duce: Thermosetting Compositions.... and you wonder tha reaction//
why do 6 year olds look at you wit physical attraction//
wow Yu Bin SunD-ly rub'd into satifaction...you a Jackson?//
personals y: I'm 17..I Respect My Elders But Not This Broke Male Pussy Dats 24..(his age)
flow both: both verses were good and wasnt stretched that much
consistancy both: both continued to diss eachother throughout
overall y: i gotta go with yu bin sund no hate

both peep some links in my sig please

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Huh china.

uppin this 5................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ............

yu got this shit it was close battle its juss duce's verse wasnt strong enough and his unches wasnt hard hitting.yu also had better flow and better wordplay.


VOTE:YBS

i need 1 more honest vote on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102394