if you vote on this i will vote on your battle just post a link..........dont sleep on this battle...........................................

look, it only takes 10 lines to beat a dude, ill let him choose//
(two choices) take it like a man, or eat ya food through a tube//
^^^good wordplay...decent punch
thats liquid food, straight to ya tummy, i will merk this dummy//
im laughin at ya name............... but aint a damn thang funny//
^^^lol...good punch.
my style mo flexible than gumby.... but you aint got no style//
since ya pops aint around, ima have ta punish you like my child//
^^^good wordplay, good punch.
.....tarheel, i scar and kill, put that heat to ya teeth, and burn ya grill//
i pop these pussies like valum pills, but i aint no substance abuser//
^^^ok punch...but no rhyme.
beat ya verse, im a rhyme bruisa, thats how i do it man//
i done wet you up so bad, they gonna call me the fireman//
^^^lol...nice punch...good personal.




ayo its fyreboy u better call dat truck/
for i come down to atl fuck u up/
^^^weak.
dis dude so ugly he couldnt ge a date if he flipped back his calender/
dude so young can even buy a beer/
^^^....um...fuckin weak
aye homie i got dumbo on the phone he whats back his ears/
when i beat u homie try to fight back the tears/
^^^eh...weak punch...at least it makes sense
dis bitch nigga put the factor in the fear/
ill rip his voice box den scream in ear/
^^^lol...ok wordplay
man i dont give a damn bout nigga/
i rip em in his on basement like big tigger/
^^^bad closer.

vote: kuntryboi

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kuntry boy took this without to much effort. He's shit was more complex, with harder punches. Other cat came on to soft and simple.

VOTE- kuntryboy

i took my time- so can you please return the fev and vote on
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103864

uppin aint nothin niggaz.....................i need to close this battle............................................ .................................................. ..........................................

Kuntryboi gets the victory here. Here's a breakdown:

look, it only takes 10 lines to beat a dude, ill let him choose//
(two choices) take it like a man, or eat ya food through a tube//
strong opener
thats liquid food, straight to ya tummy, i will merk this dummy//
im laughin at ya name............... but aint a damn thang funny//
filler, but good flow
my style mo flexible than gumby.... but you aint got no style//
since ya pops aint around, ima have ta punish you like my child//
a little played but not bad
.....tarheel, i scar and kill, put that heat to ya teeth, and burn ya grill//
i pop these pussies like valum pills, but i aint no substance abuser//
ok not bad
beat ya verse, im a rhyme bruisa, thats how i do it man//
i done wet you up so bad, they gonna call me the fireman//
I like this closer... like it better than the other one you posted actually


ayo its fyreboy u better call dat truck/
for i come down to atl fuck u up/
weak
dis dude so ugly he couldnt ge a date if he flipped back his calender/
dude so young can even buy a beer/
doesn't work, bad flow
aye omie i got dumbo on the phone he whats back his ears/
when i beat u homie try to fight back the tears/
What is this, David Spade rapping?
dis bitch nigga put the factor in the fear/
ill rip his voice box den scream in ear/
ok
man i dont give a damn bout nigga/
i stuck a pen in his lips so he wont look like jigga/
bad closer

I think kboi took it in every category.


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103093
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103069