Myster

I GOT THIS NIGGA SHELLSHOCKED
GOT MY SHELL COCKED/
No punch at all...horrible opening
ILL HIT THIS NIGGA LIKE LOCKS IN A SOCK
TIL U FIL U AINT ILL LIKE TYSON DID HOLYFIELD/
No rhyme...blah
ITS REAL YOU KNOW WHAT THEY SAY
U THE PASS AROUND BITCH THAT GIVES EVERYONE AIDS/(YOU ILL)
Blah again...horrible flow, bad punch
I GUESS THATS HOW U GOT UR NAME
WHEN THE LUNATIC PART COMES WITH
No Rhyme...no punch
6 KNIVES AND A NINE/
IM DONE LET THE VOTES COME CUZ IT DONT REALLY MATTER
No rhyme again...horrible
WHETHER OR NOT I WON
No punch or rhyme

Overall = -100/20


ILL
Wanna do Round 2... ... Losing, kid your bound too
I'm spittin a pound through, ya hittin tha ground soon
You already won
Ya tried hoein Taktik... ... ... And quickly it got reversed
Get this kid a hurse, Cuz steppin ta me he gettin kursed
Good
Better find a death bed, cuz he's been found by mortality
Fucka battle... ... i'll murder you in single line formality
Good
Defeating this bitch... ... ... its no challange its to easy
Gettin ripped so breazy, i'd swear this bitch was Too Easy
Good
I've beatin you 5-0 once... ... ... ...And I just did it again
Spittin lyrical sin, I done flipped this bitch apart and within
Good

Overall = ILLunatic

He came with harder punches and his flow and rhyme scheme was better

MYST try not typing in Caps lock and make all ya lines rhyme