My vote goes to intoxicated. Good line at the end It Sound like optimus was the one who was intoxicated.

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Intoxicated vs .iLL.
Intoxicated vs John

Ripped: Cata_Strophix, Optimus, Luminary Text

better punches intoxicared.......optimus fix ya struct lose tha ~ shit.....you show potential tho definitley.....he just had better more direct harder hitting punches/personals/disses......both flows were nice....liked the metas in this.....good newb battle........v - intox

COmon Please vote.... just get this over with.....

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Intoxicated vs .iLL.
Intoxicated vs John

Ripped: Cata_Strophix, Optimus, Luminary Text

dawg, id vote if i could, i dont know how many posts i have but when i can vote, and if u didnt already win, ill hit this up for u intox, and by the way optimus, i like what u tried to do, in the beggining it sounded like u was trying to be eminem in the way i am, fix it up and ull be aight

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Intoxicated vs .iLL.
Intoxicated vs John

Ripped: Cata_Strophix, Optimus, Luminary Text

eh.. shitty battle, but ill vote for the favor, breakdown:

punches - int: just came harder than opti..

flow - int: went a lot better than opti..

structure - int: definately! please change ur structure opti, very crudy..

multis - opt: only cause every line had like 5..

opener / closer - int: better, period..

only did this cause i need votes on my battles.. jk..

vote - intoxicated..

return da favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111358
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111350

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Intoxicated vs .iLL.
Intoxicated vs John

Ripped: Cata_Strophix, Optimus, Luminary Text

Punches: Tox, better punches, Optimus's punches were poorly aimed
Wordplay: Tox, had the pop/bubbles line, none exceptable from Opt
Multis: Optimus, basically whole verse was multis
Personals: Tox had the Optimus Prime line, no personals from Opt
Opener: Tox had a decent punch as opener, Opt's was just a load of multis
Closer: Tox, ended verse with a personal, again a horrible attempt for a punch from Opt

Vote - Intoxicated

He'll Never = Me... (think about it)no sequal~g tell u wat ill ko ur ass this time an in a months time u can recall~me
Best from Optimus

The thing is... i'm smokin YOU, yet im bad for your health/
your verse was funny... but the only person who laughed was yourself
Best bar from Intoxicated

Overall slow the multis down Optimus, just make a creative punch, that's all you need. Decent punches from Intoxicated, decent flow, just keep doing what you're doing.

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I rhyme better than who rhymes better than you

Optimus what were you doing this aint no fuckin bone thugs and harmony man dont be trying to do dat shit were you rhyme more in one line, because people are gonna jus pass your shit up. Optimus need to really work on your wording and wordplay and it might of been good if you could actually write, da bottom line is elevate a lot man!!!!!!
Intoxicated did a much better job than optimus overall, in every category Intoxicated was holding it down....no what i mean. Da best line from dis battle dat made a win to me is da optimus prime line which was sick illness. Intoxicated was pretty good too jus elevate your metaphors but overall you good with your punches and shit, keep it up.

vote= Intoxicated

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