no i am not a dick rider im just better than u get it thru ur head
im'a murder dis fag
his rhymes startin ta lag
all ya gunna c is meds carryin the body bag
he open a fourtion cookie n the scripture said
watch ur back u gunna b dead
full fledged homo walkin new york streets
askin for money n head from every man he meets.
lookin for drugs n cocks
livin in a cardboard box
dis clan member born in texas
pull a drive by in my mother fuckin lexus
my words are infectious.
but dis gaybo ain't layin in da grave rite next-ta us
dis nigga layin in the water six feet deep
i don't think ne one will find him in this bloody creek
but the dog ill catch his smell he hasn't bathed in a week
renegade roll w/ a switch blade
slit ya throught n gush out kool aid
this corruptable mc follow me for lyrical aid
in the rap game he a duce a spades
me im the ace ill put this bloody knife in the side of ya face
dis mutha fucker is a lyrical retard
u better take ya ass ta bosten school yard
u won't know a good ryme if it hit u in da face
dats y ima make ur ass a discrace
ur bankrupt debt to the floor
ur so broke u can't even afford a front door
bitch im a tell your ur style is a failure
so go the fuck back to ya dirty ass trailer
ur ice is fake u got it for a quartor
with only 50 cent ur cash flow getin shorter
MY flow is ill it's been known to kill
chronic got fucked up da ass in his jail cell
now he gay n on his way to hell
o well now they ringin a bell for him to eat
the platter of shit thrown at his feet
is this mother fucker black or white
i can see his eyes filled with fright
in fear that he mite get merked tonite
this kid is fuckd up on acid
ill kill this mutha fucker and dump his ass in lake placid
layin in da lake his ass fuckin blasted

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Man Shut The Fuck Up U Peace Of Shit. I Aint Wastin My Best Shit On Yo Ass Hoe!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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$even6five aint nuttin to fuck wit!!!!

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this is how u need to vote and give a reason y in each catagory
Flow - xxxxx, was structured better, which made it flow better

Punches - xxxxx, some were played by both cats, but i felt that xxxxx had more and the ones he did have hit alot harder

Personals - xxxxx, had alot more, and were alot better, yyyyy's were pretty lame and didn't form together to well.. suggestion xxxxx you shouldn't have to explain your personals

Multies - Obviously xxxxx, by his type of rhyme scheme, his rhyme scheme almost always guarantees him flow and multies. If your a newb take a close look and you'll see.

Vocab - Both were lacking on this, and need to elevate

Originality - Even, some of lines by both of you were played, but overall alright verses

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this is how u need to vote and give a reason y in each catagory
Flow - lil renegade's shit was structured better, which made it flow better. And Don't CAll me a fuckin' dick rider or I'll own your sorry ass Chronic.

Punches - Both of ya'll had some okay hits, but no one really stood out. Renegade had the better punches.

Personals - Negative. Not really any good personals in this battle.

Multies - Again, none really stood out.

Vocab - Both were lacking on this, and need to elevate. REally, you both do need to elevate. Renegade had better Vocab.

Originality - Both VErses sucked real bad, and ya'll need to visit the WEC, but Renegade was a lil' better with his Originality.

VOTE-Lil' Renegade. This battle sucked but I think if ya'll spent a lil' time tryin' you could elevate and be good.

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BUT I CAN'T FUCKIN' POLL VOTE CUZ SOMEBODY DONE FUCKED THIS SHIT UP. If someone could help I went back to express my CORRECTLY (Down to the fuckin' format) explained Vote, but IT DOESN'T FUCKIN' COUNT CUZ I CAN'T FUCKIN' POLL VOTE.
Please Help.

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ok im uppin ag yo

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uppin\

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close it close it

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clsoe this battle please

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i have never seen worfs repeated this much.take it back. lil john uses his words over and over and over and over. but shit man lets take hour renegade used it 3 times. not back to back. that would have a better affect for repetitive word use. fail twice. shit. the homo thing is played. i'm sure we have all heard don't use it. don't get into long battles if your vocab cants support it. w.e.c we havae to mc's needing 60 cc's of webster's thesarus. by default i have to go lil renegade since his actually rhymed

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111138

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111132

uppin uppin

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uppin

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uppin

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vote on thios shit fa heezy

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