C - alot of played concepts.. punches were all stand-alone so it killed the flow.. ya vocab is ok but u jus need to come up wiv some fresh metas to make effective punches.. also try gettin more personal.. pick apart ya opponent.. ya verse was pretty general..

B - ya usin more complex vocab an metas but be careful not to knock ya flow off wiv stretched bars.. u need ta use less words to create ya punches cos they're losin their force by the time a sentence is complete.. nice creative finisher.. best line of the battle..

VoTe = Brethren

Drop a vote on this a.s.a.p:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112698

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Open: Brethren - even though it was a lil over stretched . . shit was clean as hell! CrazyE's was hella wack!

Close: Brethren - shit had me rollin

Personals: Tie - couldn't go either way

Punches: Brethren - his shit hit harder than CrazyE's

Flow: CrazyE - nicely structured . . Brethren had a few that were a bit stretched


Vote: Brethren - obviously!


shit was a hot battle fam . . but punches wins the battle . . in fact both had punches but Brethren had the slickest ones . . get at me!


please return the favor here by voting honestly:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112155

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Yo, you gotta vote in the poll . Uppin

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I rhyme better than who rhymes better than you

Last Fucking vote, c'mon .

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I rhyme better than who rhymes better than you

ayo..... my vote goes to crazy...
because to me i thought he came alittle harder then u breth
but thatz me iight nigga but breth good battle thought