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02-10-04, 03:24 PM
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"The Eleete"
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HAHA nice diss enjoyed Walters an Feeble's verse..........good shit.........dont know much about the beef but enjoyed the read!
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02-10-04, 05:51 PM
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Must Be Bingo, I-1
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Yea...Im Just That Damn Dope
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02-10-04, 07:19 PM
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Banned: Double Voting
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I Only Liked WW's Verse, The Rest
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02-10-04, 07:22 PM
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nice no doubt. all verses had the elements of a battle script. nonetheless they
all make for a good open mic also. the punches and the keys were nice. the flow was tight. the complexity was tight enuff. the aspects of a great diss all compiled in one or another in each of the verses. nice job. hit this up in return plz: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113109 pz
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02-10-04, 08:26 PM
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nice drop guys..
i too liked walters verse the most...and then feeble aisle and outwite came decent...not bad overall it was a good read...i understoood most of the personals which helps in reading a diss collab of course... wondering how they will respond...interesting
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02-10-04, 10:12 PM
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^WE's Leader^...Dope Huh?
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IP:
Eh...Not As Good As I Was Expecting
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02-10-04, 10:17 PM
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IP:
Pretty basic...but then again i dont really battle...
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02-10-04, 11:31 PM
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IP:
I keyed my verse in a few minutes.....glad you all liked it
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02-10-04, 11:54 PM
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IP:
ehhh...
it was mediocre |
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02-11-04, 01:33 AM
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it was aiiight...I don't really like versez without multiez too much...but the dissez were pretty good...Feebz was the only nigga with multiez though...but I liked Walter'z dissez...the rest was just ok...
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02-11-04, 03:12 PM
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AKA Cereal Shelf
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IP:
Ok^
Nobody gets my personals. 
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02-12-04, 10:40 PM
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AKA Cereal Shelf
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IP:
Upp!
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02-12-04, 11:00 PM
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Flyweight
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Aisle - first 2 bars didnt rhyme, dont care how u pronounce it it'd be a hell of a force.. bowling lane was really your only good line.. defenitely weak for a diss
Out - wack.. sorry kid, the rest even if they came wack have the foundation.. u got a simple rhyme scheme and horrible disses.. they shoulda left u out of this one, no offense Feeble - a few decent multis, 2 good personals, rest seemed like filler with no good punches Walter - had a different style from the rest, decent opener, and decent ending, but nothing in between seemed to hit.. need a more complex rhyme scheme overall - not a bad diss, certainly not one that did damage, this is just an honest critque im not looking for beef, but from the name of cats considered "good" i was kinda disappointed in this, even i myself dont put much into open mics or disses i was still expecting more 1
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02-15-04, 05:21 PM
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AKA Cereal Shelf
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IP:
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First of all, who the fuck is you? Secondly, do you have some sort of speech impediment? pi - ty - yall, sick - uh - yall. Moron, learn how to rhyme, and learn what a diss is. IT'S NOT A BATTLE VERSE, it's a diss with personals 99% of those that critiqued didn't understand, yourself included.
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02-15-04, 05:27 PM
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Eddy.
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IP:
This was no so amazing, tho the line up was kinda impressive =( i expected more, no real wowies, in this here..some ok personals, but a little, simplistic...
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