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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
Afterword 5 62.50%
authentic01 3 37.50%
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Old 03-30-04, 04:48 PM   #1
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y i see madd post but only one vote
this battle is madd tardy
uppin yall
and ill take a look at yall shit too
up
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Old 03-30-04, 05:16 PM   #2
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authentic, i dug your still ((funny:slap up this kid like......im ricks james bitch))))
((nice line:now i know i smell pussy so u must be irv
finisher(((complex:so ill battle u now, and beat ya ass afterword(()() good usage of his name
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afterword u definetatly got the vocab part of this, but your punches were played : silicon tits line been played over and over, and thats yo finisher, not likin that....
and it wasn't in the rulez but u aiint soposed to bite. all and all i didnt like how u came at this battle i jus didnt like your style

vote:authentic

yo i dropped a honest vote on ya'll get at my battles in my signiture, PLLEAZE HIT DEM UP
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Old 03-30-04, 06:00 PM   #3
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I got too give this too afterword becuz he had a better vocab and an okay flow even though i kinda kept getting confused but good battle and authentic step it up
 
Old 03-30-04, 08:47 PM   #4
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yo lets get some real comments

nothing matters until, Afterword

uppin
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bomb first( I will BATTLE N E 1)

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Old 03-31-04, 02:59 AM   #5
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lets get it poppin in this bizznatch
uppin
and ill peep out yo battle
just leave a link
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bomb first( I will BATTLE N E 1)

Help me close these/ and I will help U
an EYE 4 an EYE
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122271
 
Old 04-01-04, 09:07 AM   #6
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i read both,wasnt impressed by either....but authentic had some multies at least n he posted first...closin line was ok i guess...afterward...nothin stood out in ur verse to me...so imma give this to authentic
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Old 04-02-04, 01:03 AM   #7
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come on yall can we get some votes and feed-bak
this shyt is so old
honest votes
even though i know, i riped his ass
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Old 04-05-04, 10:17 PM   #8
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yo yo yo
uppin
end this please
rock da vote!
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Old 04-05-04, 11:14 PM   #9
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authentic tried to come out the gatez swingin had but the punchz werent that hard and waznt very many personalz best thing u had waz structure

afterword had hiz shit locked had hard punchz all threw the verse and had more personalz i felt that shit more better wordplay and grammer 2

And your flows is as authentic
As a porno chic with silicon tits,
vote/afterwood

return the favor
ghost vs threatz
ghost vs gdeuce
ghost vs gkillaz
 
Old 04-09-04, 11:43 PM   #10
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yo leave a poll vote
and ill be sure to check out ya battle
peace
uppin
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bomb first( I will BATTLE N E 1)

Help me close these/ and I will help U
an EYE 4 an EYE
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122271
 
Old 04-17-04, 12:28 AM   #11
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yo does ne one vote anymore?
ill hit yurs
come on now yall
peace
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bomb first( I will BATTLE N E 1)

Help me close these/ and I will help U
an EYE 4 an EYE
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122271
 
Old 04-27-04, 11:14 PM   #12
DeaDly RhymeZ 01
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AfterWord

Open 8/10
Close 8/10
Rhymes 7/10
Flow 7/10
Punches 8/10
38/50

Authentic

Open 6/10
Close 7/10
Rhymes 6/10
Flow 6/10
Punches 7/10
32/50
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Old 04-28-04, 08:37 PM   #13
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ok man breakdown for authentic: 6/10
bestline:no need to even bring out the fists
slap up this kid like......im ricks james bitch
that shit was ok
breakdown for afterword 8/10
not bad
bestline:No need to pretend, I’ll put u in a state of vegetation
Without hesitation, to yur creator you’ll b contemplating/
afterword gets my vote
elevate and staypimpin peace
 
Old 04-30-04, 09:46 PM   #14
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yo thanx for da comments yall
and ill hit ya battle with an honest poll
if u can help me close this one
peace
uppin
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bomb first( I will BATTLE N E 1)

Help me close these/ and I will help U
an EYE 4 an EYE
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122271
 
Old 04-30-04, 11:23 PM   #15
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AFTERWORD
FLOW=8
PUNCHES=7
OPEN=7
CLOSE=5

authentic01
FLOW=8
PUNCHES=8
OPEN=7
CLOSE=6

authentic01 GETS MY VOTE CUZ I WAS FEELING HIS RAP MORE
 
 


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