aigh let me break this down young duke your flow was average at best im not really sure if you meant for this to be a punch or what but it made no sense
Check ya name ya ass is a Rookie that aint even alive yet
i think he knows his name and for you to put it in your flow the way you did made no sense your flow was ok strucure is getting better no hard punches no metaphors that stuck out and the multis were weak you could have done better
3/10

unborn this isnt your best either by any means i have seen you do better i had to read this line twice to make sure i read it write then it made sense
Yung Duke -- you duke like ya young, dude /
Get torn by Unborn – Do you really want to? /
and by the punches young duke threw it made perfect sense to say that your structre is there flow was decent multis not that many metaphors need work punches a few stuck other than that it wasnt much of a battle
unborn 5/10
v-unborn rookie

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Unborn
Fores ^^^
Style ^^^

Duke
Fores ^^
Style ^^^

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still uppppppiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!

UBR

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aight i think both verses were ok...
duke i liked this part
"What good rapper you beaten, let me take a guess, nobody,
You'll never beat me, Iv'e seen ya battles, why press ya luck,
this dumb nigga Im'd me on AIM to say thanks for me sayin he sucks,"

rookie..
u had better flow...punches were bout equal,but i liked ur closing line better..n that was the decider for me
so vote =rookie

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