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Kuniva 4 44.44%
accomplishment 5 55.56%
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Old 04-08-04, 11:44 PM   #16
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From: Da Nasty North
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its ok though we all know kuniva d.r.'s original r.b. members that vote can slide
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Old 04-08-04, 11:57 PM   #17
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wut? i am just commenting on how close this battle is, nice spit accomplishment, hope this beef is finally over...
 
Old 04-09-04, 12:06 AM   #18
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Im Goin With Accom.Kuniva Started Off Ok But His Verse Got Weaker And Ended Weak.He Had Too Many Played Punches & Weak Disses.In A Beef Battle,Strong Personals Are Part Of The Key To Victory.Accom Came Strong With Some Tight Punches But Started To Slack Off In The Middle.He Ended Pretty Strong.

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Old 04-09-04, 12:08 AM   #19
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^ try not to say the exact same thing other people say, it becomes obvious u didnt read the verse
 
Old 04-09-04, 12:15 AM   #20
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ok it was an aight battle...expected more outa both of u actually.
BREAKDOWN
Opener - kuniva...his flowed more and i didnt really get accomp's...
Flow - kuniva...accomp ya flow was fucked up because of stretched lines..werk on that...
Punches - kuniva...he came harder than accomp...his punches hit harder...i didnt feel ne ya punches accomp cept for the face off one...
Multi's - neither had many multi's...
Closer - kuniva...barcode line was hot!!...
Vote - kuniva
accomp u came weak...need to elevate ya game...nice spit kuniva....u didnt do ur best but u did wat it took
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Old 04-09-04, 12:20 AM   #21
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cmon man,class sic in bold, ass kicked just fold??? cmon man, good multi
 
Old 04-09-04, 12:36 AM   #22
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Kuniva- You could of done better.. you had more personalz some aight punchz.. both ya'll had good structure..


Acc- I felt you had a better flow, straight punchz and metaz..an came harder... good creativity.. an everythin else


PUNCHZ- Acc
VOCAB- Neither
CREATIVITY- Acc
METAZ- Acc
PERSONALS- Kuniva
STRUCTURE- Both

vote= ACC

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Old 04-09-04, 12:55 AM   #23
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aight still uppin yo
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Old 04-09-04, 01:15 AM   #24
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A'ight...I enjoyed this battle...kuniva...you had a decent verse, you came wit some punches and a nice personal...flow was off though, which sorta ruined your personal...and you should try your hardest to use some other words that rhyme...

6/10

Best Line: this guy really wanted to battle me, thats why he follows me around this site
goin in every forum im in, tryna convince me his shit is tight


Worst line: it will be a true ACCOMPLISHMENT, if he can get enough dr votes,
to win a battle, but compared to his verse, theirs more rhyming lines in a barcode


Accomplishment...tite verse dawg...your structure mainly stayed consistent, and you had a punch in every bar...nice shit...all's you need to do is work on structure, to make sure flow stays intact...overall, you punches were hard...tite shit...the "ties to the street" shreet was fuckin' dope...

8/10

Best line: said ya could see the future, so i kicked ya in ya face, brought ya "eyes to my "feet"....
end up wit yo shoes onna "lamp-post", yeah you got "ties-to-the-street".../


Worst line: yo bitch welcome to "ClAS" today ya learn how accomplishment whips fuckin ass.../
Im da "Sic"kest, if requirment was to fuckin loe, kuniva dawg you pass.../


Looks like both of your closers weren;t that great...but overall, I think Accomplishment gets this one with an overall better verse...tite shit thogh, no beef...

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Old 04-09-04, 01:19 AM   #25
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damn, this was a wicked good battle. Both of you goys had nice flos. I was feelin' both. You both also had nice punches. I also liked the punches by both. You guys were pretty even there. Your closers could use a little work, though. But overall, I think Acomp won this by a slight margin. Good job by both.

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Old 04-09-04, 01:05 PM   #26
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ya this battle goes to Kuniva much better structure and much better flow i just got one problem kuniva u put to much emphasis on multis. simplifie your rhymes hit hard and fast and keep them coming
accomplishment- u got crazy skillz ive seen some of your other battles u just didnt bring the game to Kuniva i know that u can rhyme better than that and also u gotta simplify your ryhmes as well use the K.I.S.S method its pretty childish but if u ryhme with that method in mind u will get the point across a lot better
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Old 04-09-04, 01:13 PM   #27
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i just feel multies make a verse flow better, and im good at them so why the hell not...
 
Old 04-09-04, 02:30 PM   #28
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aight still uppin yo
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Old 04-09-04, 02:45 PM   #29
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Didn't really wanna vote on this, cause i don't want this nigga to think i'm hatin', but, here goes.

Multis- Acc
Vocab- Acc
Flow-Acc
Punches- even
Creativity- Kun

Accomplishment- You came wit it, I think you came wit some good shit. Overally, it wasn't very spectacular, but still a very solid performance.

Best shit:
said ya could see the future, so i kicked ya in ya face, brought ya "eyes to my "feet"....
end up wit yo shoes onna "lamp-post", yeah you got "ties-to-the-street".../

I don't know why, that shit had me rollin' though, the sneakers on the telephone pole, it's just funny.

Kuniva- Just to let you know, even though you popped madd shit, If you had won, I woulda said so cause that's who I am, but you didn't. Like you said yourself, some of your shit was just a stretch to rhyme, but I think if they had a lil' better, you coulda taken this. Approximate rhyme is just a hard thing to pull in text. But you honestly wasn't that badd. Bigg Ups pimpin'.

Best Shit:

gettin mad at me, for makin fun of ur crew
but class has two s's, its like ur maken fun of em too

Just liked the play on the crew, it was hott.

RESPECT TO BOTH Y'ALL NIGGAZ, IT WAS AN AIGHT BATTLE.

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Old 04-09-04, 04:49 PM   #30
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this sure is gettin slept on for bein two good, and known emcees on this site.
 
 


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