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ok heres the lowdown
this was one of the tightest battles ive ever seen on rb both of ur punches hit both of u had great wordplay the flow and structure of the ryhmes were matched up but my vote goes to shadows edge i just felt that his verse hit a little harder it had a good opener and a good closer the only thing that u gotta work on is stop trying to ryhme with the same thing any monkey can do that. there is a time and a place for that and its called grade school. but anyways awsome battle and good job shadows edge
Vote: shadows edge

return the favor with an honest vote hit up
Mike12ikeda versus Diablo-vice

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DIABLO-VICE


Wins:
Lokie




respect list:
Wildfire


return the favor with an honest vote please
these are my currently open battles

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118868

aight *cough* *Cough* uppin for votes

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ok all the herb battles get 5 votes and this gets none. upin ^^

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RIP SMOKAJOKA WE WILL MiSS YOU!!!!!!

uuuuuuuuuuuupin for votes up in hurr

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uppppppppppppppppppppppppppp for votes man

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votes man..................COME ON PEOPLE WILL RETURN DA FAVE DROPPA LINK

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umm nice battle....

STRUCTURE-shadow
PUNCHLINES-accomp
WORDPLAY-..accomp
PERSONALS-umm nun
ENJOYED-accomplishment...no hate on shadow but i aint feel da way ya bars was ryhmin dunn...

MY VOTE-ACCOMPLISHMENT

RETURN DA FAVOR NIGGAZ 4 REAL WHERE EVA U SEE MY BATTLE AT VOTE

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U NOT FUKKiN WiTH ME PLaiN N SiMP!...

Da "SiCKEST ON DiS SiTE" LiNE HaS BEEN USED aGaiNST ME 50 x'S...U DUDES aBUSED iT

Upppppppppppppppppp for votes accom up 3-1 shits hard to watch like medusa

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yo votes people chomon

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uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuppp for votessssssss

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Alright No 'Bull-Shit' ... Im Going To Give This Shit ! To Accomp For The Fact That His' .. Punches Hit Harder & Connected If That!!' ..

Checck These Lines For Good Punchlines & A Good Opener:

Ya stepped to quick to get hurt, vets like me dispurse of da rest...
I merk who is left, its likeya "heart is a magnet" the way theese "bullets" hitten ya "chest"...


Fag, verse isnt noticed if you typed in bold, cuz you puttin ya "hands" around "heads", aint mean you give "choke holds"...
my freestyles is "ill" off da "dome", like i gotta "head cold".../

^Nice Use Of Multies! & Good WordPlay' ....!!!

Licken ya wounds and talkin shit, avoiden my beatin Aint-helpin-it...
cuz ya be seein I.C.U. more than the fucken Alphabet...

^ I Like The Closer!! Nice Shit' ... Playa..!! I Enjoyed Your Verse But You Need To Work On Your Structure & Flow!!!!


Shadows edge!! : You Need To Work On Your WordPlay & Vocab

Vote: Accomplishment!!

(Well explained Vote)

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up for votes...................................

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this one goes to accomplishments it was hot.... aight and this is as follows



accomp showed his ass off... especially liked this line....
Ya verse is racket, get mad at it, stopped and leave ya body wrapped in plastic...
ya oblivious fuck a casket, i leave ya body on ya front porch, inya easter basket.../

accomp.
flow 8/10
style 8/10
rhythm 8/10
vocab 9/10
punches 7/10 therefore it's 40/50

here is the line i liked from shadowsedge
kick this *ass* out of *classic*, leave it with the same empty clic
as the sound of your whack crew firing guns with empty clip...that tookok some thinking hot line shadow
here is shadowsedge
flow 5/10
style 7/10
rhythm 7/10
vocab 6/10
punches 5/10 30/50

my vote is for accomplishments