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break down

first killuminatic...

I saw your pic u was rockin avirex
That went outta style 10 years ago nigga where u pay for fits?
7
Actin like u smoke but ya eyes aint chinky,
U still choke then wonder why u aint beat me
6.5
Dont lie u spend ya whole life tryin to be me
I wont forget, youre the first one im sendin the cd
9
Boy ya just an anoyance like whistlin through gap teeth
U dont have to listen to acknowledge my rap sheet
8
Dude likes his men hard and soft at the same time
One who got whiffle balls when its game time
7
Biker dude with a helmet and no visor
His mom didnt like his new friend but she'd still ride him
7
He pulled out this dudes ass when his mom caught him
Said "Sodomy aint that bad look at Saddam"
8


yo nigga you aint never gonna be gangsta fam you just fucking a gangsta fan//
the only thing you ever killed was your carrier when got in this battle with gam//7.5
you the first to run from a fight but the first to talk cause you be speekin' quick//
and this nigga be the first to say his rhymes is deep..........yeah deep in shit!//8
all this bitch do is talk gangsta but in the end he just another newbie herb//
OH! yeah this nigga gangsta.......yeah right.......livin in a gangsta suburb//7
(ha! ha! ha!)
truthfuly i dont like guns......so i'll just slice you up and stick you in bags//
cause man i dont really like loud noises.......so mabe i'll just stick to stabs//5
and if you ever do git a gun and blast it....... you better run and stash it//
cause you know them niggas in jail love white boys that act like faggots//6.5


breakdown v-kiill

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Im a have to give this to Gambino his spit was off the hook and made some kind of sense.
Killu i think your problem relied in your structure so thats mainly what you need to work on. flow was nice

vote= Gambino

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Flow- Kill
Punches- Gam
Multies- Kill
Vocab- Tie
Creativity- Gam
Content- Gam

VOTE- Gambino.... His punches just blew kid out the water thats what won if for you .. Nice verse

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