both were really weak..but ill..that nightcrawer line,i wanted to throw my computer it was so weak..........im not gonna really brake it down but...i'll have to give this to discharge.........

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aight..both of ya had simple rhymes..but the spit was good..this was easy to choose who won...

Ill:
Spit: 6/10 boring thats why
multi: 2/10 was there any?
punch: 6/10 lil punch

dis:
Spit: 8/10 Nice Opener
multi: 6/10 nice multis
punch:8/10

as u can tell discharge had the upper hand up in here....discharge had simple rhymes but put them good together to make the lines hit strong

Aight ill..I know ur really good..but for some reason wasn't showin that skill at all in this spit..ur punches were good but almost so bad..it was close to being wack..
U had no multis which made it boring..and jst didn't have enough punches to kill discharge..aight..

vote: discharge

hmm wasnt that great...

Ill- ur last 4 lines was the hottest....dont say get ur crew 2 vote cause thats wht u'll do 2 get sympathy...overall...ur last 4 lines was good but didnt hit as hard...they were funny howeva...ur flow and structure was good...but ur punches wasnt there all the way...u should have been consistant

Discharge-ur punches werent that hott either but u did enough 2 get my vote...ur punches were hitting him as far as im concerned..ur flow and structure was good...BUT THIS BATTLE IS DUMB U BOTH GOOD...WHY NOT WORK 2GETHER AND ELEVATE INSTEAD OF FIGHTING 2 SEE WHO STAYS IN THE CREW...JUST LEAVE THE CREW IF NO 1 WANTS U IN THE CREW...GOES FOR BOTH OF U...THERES PLENTY OF CREWS THAT WILL PICK YALL UP...

ok okok damn i gotta give this too discharge...i think the first line took ill ill u coo wit me but ur shit was aiight discharge had a sick verse......the first line dis put i was like...dayum.....ill work on ur vocab and punches and multies..but good battle

vote:discharge

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breakdown:

...ILL...:

Discharge you wack as hell you wack as rhymin isnt gone get ya far
My rhymes leave ya behind the window like yo wack ass mike myers avatar
^^ill ass opener good personal 9/10
His record he 9-0 becuz hes battlin newbs but ya cant beat me (G)
Someon stop this bitch discharge b4 I charge this battery....(get it)
^^another hott ass punch good shyt so far 8/10
You made you dont get no pussy so ya sux dick for a doller...
This bitches rhymes is so bitched they make you turn blue the same color as night crawler...
^^this bar is stretched but stilla good punch 7/10
He pop wit fuckin water guns he dont fuckin pop with nines....
He battles newbs that dont know how to set it up in front lines.....
^^lol another personal and punch good shyt 8/10
So go ahead and get ya crew votes becuz true votes is what ya lack....
Becuz now im like the terminator so if ya beat me ill be back....
^^ ill closer good wordplay in 1st line 7/10

overall: 39/50

discharge:

for u this battle will be uphill, you could have hivs and still not be' ill"//
beatin me is your dream, that you cannot fufill,becuz you lack "skill"//
^^good use of multies but it didnt flow at all bad opener 5/10
ull be my next kill,u must like losin i guess it gives you a thrill//
ok ill tell the truth, let the beans spill,leave rapbattles stay home and chill//
^^nothing interesting 6/10
you lost this you should detect, realize the fact that uve been wrecked//
your punches were not only weak but incorrect,you clearly cant make them connect//
^^gettin better 7/10
from a bitch like u what can we expect, u wont get one vote its called "wack mc neglect"//
heres the truth with-all-respect, if you think your rhymes are sweet get yourself checked//
^^stretched bars and seemed force OK punch 6/10
now right here its time for the truth admit,you cant and never will be able to spit//
your rhymes are just plain shit, so next time think before you right garbage and pres"submit"//
^^weak finisher point blank 4/10

overall:28/50

vote: ....ILL....... his punches and personals were ill by far the best verse i have ever seen from him....discharge this is by far the worst thing u have ever dropped in your life..u didnt interest me in any way punches were OK no personals all u had was sick multies and some wordplay

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