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06-17-04, 02:39 PM
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real in depth u need structure but ur flows will get at dat level soon keep workin on it aiight holla 1
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06-17-04, 03:12 PM
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in depth but put words 2getha like ur tellin a story nobody has read b4
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06-17-04, 03:52 PM
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nice nice but 2 much writing & no flow between da lines
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