dude u suck you sorry i merked you lol
your kod like the rest of your battles i bet u wont even get 1 vote

uppin for votes so vote

-Lyrikal19.
I KNOW BITCHES LIKE TO RUN THEIR MOUTH THATS WHY I PULL A BLADE AND THEN YOU ARE OUT//
YOU SAID YOUR FROM THA HOOD, WEREN'T YOU A BOY SCOUT? EARNED YOUR BADGES IN WHAT...HOW TO TALK EBONIXS
flow was off and on, aight wordplay, weak punch
WHERE YO FROM HOMIE//
BETTER TELL ME NOW//
IF YOU CAN RUN MY LIFE BETTER//
TELL ME HOW//
flow was off and on, no wordplay, no punchline
CAUSE YOUR AS WELCOME AS WHITEY AT A POW WOW//
LIKE TO SEE YOU TRY ME NOW//
flow was average, aight wordplay, first punch was aight, should've switched the lines around
I'VE MADE YOU BECOME A PART OF MY PAST//
THE GOOD DIE YOUNG BUT THE BAD SEE LYRICALL CAST WHEN I BLAST//
U THINK U CAN LAST THEN COME ON HOMEBOY BLAST
coo flow, no wordplay, no punch


-Unfortunate.
he been gone so long, unfortunatley im bout to burn him like chek and chong
ill smoke you longer then a bong, beat you hard then a muslim beating a gong
good flow, aight wordplay, weak punch
you lieing to self lyrkial, those punches were so weak you need a marycle
like rhyming its unparable, crowds flock in bunches cause its so terrible
good flow, weak wordplay, weak punch
my punches mutalate the living, you can relate since im the one giving
try to compete i leave you spining,im undefeted and still goin on winning
coo flow, no wordplay, weak punch
i looked at your record its a relieve, he hasent even got a single vote i beleive
trying to win pulling shit yo sleeve, i beat this nigger so bad i just got to leave
coo flow, weak wordplay, weak punch
im gifted by all of the gods, you talk some more shit ill kill you with metal rods
try asking the mods, il ship you out and mail you to a guy near the cape cods
coo flow, weak wordplay, weak punch


Overall, Un got this. He had the better flow and atleast attempted punches. Un, you're trying to fit too many ideas into one line. Just focus on one idea and word it well mayne. Lyrik, work on your flow, wordplay, and punches mayne.


Vote - Unfortunate.

ill vote on this if u vote on my battle first http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131972

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yo wee need some votes well repay the fav..............................................

weak battle

Flow-Since Lyrikal didnt rhyme much or it was really weak, Unfornuate won here

Punches- Weak punches lyrickal, unfornutate and so wat good punches

Complexity-Unfornuate seems more experienced so his skils are more evolved

Overall Unfornuate came harder

So vote Unfortunate

RETURN DA FAVOR, LINK IN MY SIG

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yo i like the battle but unfortunate killed hes got my vote

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vote please

yo uppin for votes lets get this thing over with already send a link and ill repay the favor

yo lets get this closed, so we need some votes, we'll repay the favor

damn I need ya'll mafuckas to hurry up and close this battle out 4 me.....Its 3-0 me so far here is the link

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132586

you vote on mine I vote on your scouts honor!!!!!! Lol

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