I dont have 100 posts, but this was really a great battle and I just wanted to drop my oppinion on it.

Hoops: Ive seen some of your other battles, and I really like your style. Although I dont think you came as hard as ive seen from you before. Your structure and flow was a lil off (as I did flow your verse to a beat).

" funny how this kid longs to be a man of color..
usin slang like "Da" in names, while screamin "HEY! Whats up brother".."

This really threw your flow off, and Brother+color I think was a bad choice of rhymes/wordplay.

" this kid thinks hes an einstein, the IQ of a genius..
when really theres a thin line, between him and a penis.."

A good personal, Im not sure what other dude was sayin about this, but I liked it.

DaClassic: I liked flow, and it went together well. There wasnt much I could complain about.

" I'm detachin' your chord , From hard tapping on keyboards. Oops!!
The reason I'm america's most wanted top ten, Is for shooting hoops"

That bar was tight, esp with the double meaning on "Shooting hoops"

" Females say you not even cute, Make up artists would take a full day
Can I borrow your face, because My Ass(butt) is going on holiday."

I really thought you got bored when you got to this point. Even though its a diss, its real weak, and just comes off to me as filler. I didnt like the wordplay in this either.

Overall though, nice verses from both of you two.

Vote = DaClassic

aighyt.. just clearin the lien about his IQ, its below his avatar and some where else.. but good look and thanx for droppin an opinion... Still uppin yall.. lol

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Uppin Can You'll Bring The Votes Please....let's Get This Thing Over With.

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whoa sick intro...that shaq shit was illl mfao

anywayz:

hoops: your shit was surprsining good...your flow was good...your structure was good too...your punches were there...your personals were hittin too...good shit dawg....your vocab and wordplay was right on point good job

class: got damn this shit was hot...good intro...opener was sick...closer was sick too...vocab and wordplay was flamin...good punches n personals...this was a sick verse

vote:da classic

i aint gon poll vote until u drop a vote in this battle http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...d.php?p=1369886

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hoops: aight hmmm......in my opinion you had a pretty good verse ok punches in there flow was nice but not the greatest I've ever seen in
my life vocab was ok....... wordplay was ok aswell as the rest of the
categories i've seen in there

overall: 6.5/10

DaClassic: aight........I say you had a really really tight verse your
punches hit harder than Hoops no hate tho......flow was nice rhyme
scene was really good....vocab was nice syllable was real good &
the rest of your categories were the same as the rest

overall: 7.5/10

vote goes to: DaClassic

do a honest vote on my shit links in my signature....

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damn.. 4-0.. looks like i got served... all good tho.. we still uppin.. thanx for the votes thus far fuckers (jokes) hehe.. but on the real, much appreciated..

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uppin...

Uppin for more votes.. leave links and i'll drop a clean one

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uppin.

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uppin people come on with the votes...so this thing can get over with....

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uppin..

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hoops ya opener started out pretty tight then the punch was weak as hell brah nice set up line but no punch to me your closer again the same thing nice wordplay in the set up but no real punch to me an the rest of your verse had a few nice lines to me like this 1 killed it
funny how this kid longs to be a man of color..
usin slang like "Da" in names, while screamin "HEY! Whats up brother"..
^ LMAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
but the rest of your verse lacked punchs to me had good wordplay and a few nice lines but didnt feal most of it

classic ya opener was decent i think the punch wasnt worded right or somethin more like lost in thought bein familiar territory would have sounded better to me sayin hes there all the time but um ya closer lmao clownin nice set up an nice punch an the rest of your verse started off slow to me then kinda picked about after the first for lines then the rest was nice nice spit

vote daclassic

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