it was close but i liked high-tech better so thats who my vote goes 2

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U can't Touch tha Untouchble
Break tha Unbreackable
Shake tha Unshakeable
Move tha Unmovealble

iight...i thought both verses were ok. both came mildly hard, but monsta...you didn't come hard enough. nice multies, personals, n flow, but tech brought some harder shit. sorry dawg...

vote: tech

high tech had it won, he jus had the better linez all around, better flow, better punchs, and i think it went together good.

v/high tech

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aight yall uppin for sum votes.....................

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Hi tech's verse was ok, It was too simple tho. He had weak punchess and his tyson and Vanilla ice shit was wak. I wasnt feelin his verse at all. His lines were stretched and his wordplay wasnt really all that decent. J had an ok verse, I thought his punchlines hit better and his flow was to. I dont realy understand why the fat joke but at the same time I dont understand why Hi felt he had to pop Genocides name in so I didnt count it against him.
Flow, J
Punch, J
Structure, J
Wordplay, none

V/ J da Mo.

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hmm kinda lopsided battle. High i have to say u won. harder punches, better flow, and better structure. neither one of u tried a personal. better metas for high. "he so scared to spit he left tha forum look at tha hesitation~
stick his own head up his ass and watch him die from constipation~" haha i lov that punch. very nice. "This cat's got more 'nuts' in his mouth, than in "Snickers Bars"//
Rhymes is so deathly sick, im diagnosed with "SARS"//" um its ok. but not great. peace

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alright props to both battlers, but here's the verdict.
high tech-decent structure in this one, this was your plus in your verse.
with a nice line
stick his own head up his ass and watch him die from constipation~
but your downside, as is in many people's here is the corniness of certain lines.

the only thing this kid is packin is a bad hackin fuckin cough~
i bet he's lookin at my name rite now and startin to wack off~
i couldnt take this line seriously at all. try to come more serious, and nearly beef wit it.
so inhale exhale this massacre that u facen that str8 radiation~
like it was genocide it's eradication so put in your recomendation~
those lines didn't make sense. points off severely for that alone.

i-you came with decent structure. lyrically you guys are nearly the same. except you understand that you must come serious. And your verse, though small effort, was more serious to battling so this is why you got this one.

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high-teck had it better flow and punches didnt see to many metas multis aight but overall this was high tecks he had 1 line with good vocab but nun the less thats my vote the other cat had pretty good stucture thats all
v/high-tech
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