i can't vote on this one cuz... Hoops urs was real creative from good use of simple words to the bright ass colors (lol) which was real talented... and g-Ballz i liked your use of words and ya structure... that was so damn close i can't even vote on that... i could relate to both!
*hold up, this shit hit home...*
did you find someone else to fill the empty space in your soul?~
were you seduced while in a unstable condition not in control?~
I missed you forever and I wanna tell you my feelings never changed~
but I want you to be happy if it costs me being mental and deranged......
^^G-Ballz

that was after i found out my ex-boyfriend over 4 months cheated on me... lol now baby gurl got a lifetime thug-ass nigga...
damn i gotta give it to G-Ballz fa that...
vote/ G-Ballz

i liked urs too Hoops!!!

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great shit from both of u emcees....props

my vote has to go to G-Ballz tho....mad close

Hoops-ur verse had great flow and passion....but i was confused about one thing, u said at the end u were talkin about ur first true love "ur mother"....but above u said "love making mends us"....as in like u have sex with ur mom when u argue...haha maybe i read it wrong but thats the impression it gives...all in all tho straight verse

G-Ballz-also a great deal of passion....i think u had a lil better emotion and creativity in ur verse 9ehich was what i was lookin for since its a love topic)....ur flow was good enough and i was just feelin it more

2 great versus for a topical battle tho keep at it homies....

can u drop honest votes in these battles of mine 2 plz....id appriciate it....peace:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132614
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132724
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132597

makin love bro, dont always mean sex.. making love is making actions that show love, at least to me.. all good.. he ha da dope drop, so its gona be close! uppin 3-2

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uppin on our first topical ever! dont sleep on it.

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wow this is probably gonna be a close battle good luck Hoops!

~Uppin~

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yea.. gonna be close... UPPIN.. 3-2 we both need some votes

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uppin....this should be nominated for best text battle (topical) of the month
for all the positive feedback its gettin'!

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uppion this for votevotevotevotevotevotevotevotes.. leave links and we will het em up..

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This was a very very close topical...both drops had beautiful imagery...deep shit...I like em both...Hoops had the structure...Ballz had the vocab...both flowed good...but I was feelin' G's slightly more I think., due to better vocab. Hot topical though...

No hate.

Vote- G-Ballz

My Topical against Shadow...

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129842

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WOW: these were two amazing pieces of work
both: very vivid emotion in your writing style, great use of words
both had incredible flow,easily and well read
emotional use of words from both.....this is hard to vote on,
because u both are true poets, props
But::: i think i have to give this to hoops because of the fact that when i think of true love i think of a significant other aka boyfriend, but since i was challenged in my thinking by hoops(he surprised me with mother) then ima have to give it to him...
VOTE:Hoops

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its mighty close people...we only need a few more votes... leave your links and we will hit them up!

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