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07-03-04, 12:09 PM
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The Light
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IP: ED92 B424
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> ______ _____ ______ ________ uppin..end thisbattle plz lol
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Mixtape Pushed Back to mid september.. Holla at me for a copy still I'm felt cause im real. Can you say the same ? Prolly not.
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07-03-04, 11:06 PM
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The Light
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IP: ED92 B424
UPPIN.. plz close this battle, i got other battle i wanna get in ^_^
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Mixtape Pushed Back to mid september.. Holla at me for a copy still I'm felt cause im real. Can you say the same ? Prolly not.
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07-04-04, 02:10 AM
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I have a lot to learn...
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IP: 48EA 7C3F
hmmm yeah... ok... well infareds verse didnt rhyme, had no structure or flow, a tiny bit of wordplay, and hardly any punches...
hoops.. some alright punches, solid flow, decent wordplay and nice structure/... so my v/ hoops... infareds really gotta elevate one
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07-04-04, 03:43 AM
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The Light
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IP: ED92 B424
uppin for the win guys.. let close this plz.. leave links
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Can I Metaphor?
Mixtape Pushed Back to mid september.. Holla at me for a copy still I'm felt cause im real. Can you say the same ? Prolly not.
Proud OYD member again
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07-04-04, 01:25 PM
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The Light
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IP: ED92 B424
uppin for the last vote... end this battle plz..and leave link
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Can I Metaphor?
Mixtape Pushed Back to mid september.. Holla at me for a copy still I'm felt cause im real. Can you say the same ? Prolly not.
Proud OYD member again
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07-04-04, 02:07 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 9EF2 7F0D
Infared you need to put some structure in your verse. You need to break it down in lines, bars or something. It makes it harder to read, and actually pick out the rhymes the way you did it. You didnt use any personals against him, I dunno if you even used any punches, cause i had a hard time finding anything other than a giant run on sentance.
Hoops, I aint gotta say much, you had nice multis, nice flow and overall structure wasnt that bad. You lyrically murdered him, KO. |
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