body count
Your verse wasnt bad i see you have creativity you had some punches but it wasnt
hard enough you should've went for personals and personals wins battles
half of your verse was filler or selfglorification tho...but you have potential
nice metas ok vocab work on it
structure on flow could have been better

durmil
good drop you had a harder hitting punches
nice wordplay good vocab good metas
basically you have the better overall verse
you had some stretched lines and flow was off a little
structure was ok i guess

vote/durmil for better overall verse