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4 | 44.44% |
| BZ No Mercy |
  
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5 | 55.56% |
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07-06-04, 08:55 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: C1DA C961
LoL I dont even know what to say... It looked like there was more than one battle here.
BZ - You need to work on your strucrure...it makes it hard to follow ya shit and things. I read over it a few times though, and I could pick it up (I copy pasted it and broke it down myself actually) BZ did have a lot of multi rhymes in there, and when i broke it down it really did have a nice flow to it. A few punchlines in there also, like the tornado debris. BZ you aint really have any personals though...and actually a few metas. Femcee you had a good structure, flow was decent. Femcee where were the punches? You were comparing him to 50 cent and banks...2 proven emcees? why? Femcee you didnt use any multis, and your opening meta kinda went in his favor. I think you underestimated him...even though he didnt have much structure his verse really wasnt bad. v/BZ No Mercy |
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07-06-04, 09:15 PM
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the medicine man
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IP: A49A 4FF0
No Mercy's Shit Was Better But Just Like U Im Not That Impressed But U
Beat Her, Ima Look Out For Both Of You |
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07-06-04, 09:23 PM
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#18
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: F9BD 36BD
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07-06-04, 09:29 PM
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...UnBroken Perfection...
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IP: 0F8A 7B91
Bz structure was off i couldnt follow it and most of your verse was selfglorification
you need to diss not kill personals wins battles you had some metas and you have potential just eleavte femcee you won this because you had punches the opener was ill the dell line had me rollin but you had punches so i say you take this one v/femcee |
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07-07-04, 02:03 PM
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#20
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: F9BD 36BD
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07-15-04, 07:22 PM
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#21
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Light Weight
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IP: B014 53F1
im givin this to..........femcee
she came wit some better punches..structure was easy to follow...metas was ight but good bz..i wasnt feelin it he talkin like he the lead mc of a colt...good metas and wordplay though but for a text battle he lacked some personals..
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07-21-04, 04:42 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 4289 77F4
WEEL I THOUGHT DAT FEMCEE
WON BCUZ BZS FLOW WAS KINDA OFF AT TIMES MOST OF DA TIME I DIDN'T KNO WUT U WERE TALKIN BOUT V/FEMCEE VOTE 4 DEEZ BATTLES PLEASE AMAYZE VS FORGOTTEN FLOW http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136031 KOOL COL-B http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136465 MURDA-GRAM http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136506 2HARD2LOSE http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136487 THANX |
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07-21-04, 04:53 PM
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#23
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Im Short.Ur Fat.He's Gay.
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IP: 1F04 ECAE
dont change ur font size to make it NOT STRETCHED. (femcee)
dont change color cus it bothers my eyes. Im not voting because of this.-1 |
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07-24-04, 07:52 AM
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#24
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Flyweight
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IP: EC0B 84C7
FEMCEE IM SORRY GURL BUT YOU WAS OFF THE HOOK, I LIKE THAT VERSE
(YOU WANT A MIC FOR XMAS BUT DDUDE YOUR GETTING A DELL) EVEN THOUGH FEMCEES WAS SHORT IT HIT DIRECTLY WHERE IT NEEDED TO BE LANDED BZ YOUR THE STRUCTURE WASNT HITTING, I MEAN I COULDNT UNDERSTAND IT IF I READ IT OVER 5 TIMES, AND THATS WASTIN MY TIME, BUT KEEP UP THE FLOWWIN YOU GOT GOOD LYRICS JUST STRUCTURE A LITTLE BETTER PLAYA........ IL VOTE JUST LET ME GET MY 20 POSTS IN, IS DAT KOO AND UHH OH YEAH !!! REMEMBER SHARE THE FAVORE IN MY BATTLE AGAINST MARVOULOUSJ I WILL VOTE FOR YOUR UPCOMING BATTLES AS FAIR DEAL MONSOON VS marvolousj TELL ME HONESTLY WHAT YOU THINK 1
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AT ANY TIME MONSOON COULD ERUPT, YEAA YOU CREATE THAT, ITS LIKE THROWIN GUNPOWDER IN A PITBULLS FOOD AND WATCHIN IT REACT !!! LYRICAL TERRORISM monsoon vs pictaperfect2 monsoon vs big tissle RETURNED FAVS |
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07-24-04, 08:03 AM
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...tha princess of rv...
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IP: 6AD2 8F43
yeh.im gona have to vote BZ...even though i duidnt like ur verse at all........
structure and flow sucked.no hate femcee-well u had beta structure,,,,,but your punches were really weak.u had gud wordplay and concepts,but your punches were really weak.. vote.BZ RETURN THA FAV http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...d.php?p=1433412 |
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07-24-04, 02:10 PM
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IP: 3240 794D
Aight this battle was really not too hot...
BZ No Mercy: had punches, no structure whutsoever, but he had multis and it did flow ^Fix ya structure aight, that's all.. Femcee: had sum punches but they didn't hit hard, betta structure overall and it did flow easier due to the structure.. ^enhance ya punches or at least the intensity aight.. this verse fell off: either you down with all g-unit or be through it... ...and if you dont be through it, im goin'a see to it /2 ^Femcee but the rest was str8.. i would dissect y'all shit but because of different structures i won't this time.. Femcee you did a good job but BZ No Mercy came harder overall... My Vote/ BZ No Mercy ~wun~
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