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Fuse 1 16.67%
sporadic 5 83.33%
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Old 07-14-04, 04:51 AM   #1
PoEtIc JuStIcE
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Ok

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IMA BREAK IT DOWN.........



SPORADIC
This herb reFUSE's to spit first so he can feed on my lyrical creation
coz he lacks in interlect,
...and an active battle imagination
OK....PUNCH...OK WORDPLAY 7/10
Your static just not going anywhere, while my elevation is persistant
your talent is like ur avatar character,
...fake and nonexistant
BETA WORDPLAY..DECENT PUNCH 8/10
can tell hes a herb by his basic rhymes the name emcee u abuse
shock him with lyrical voltage
...call me a electric surge the way this fuse
2ND LINE OK...6/10
taking dignity, strangle your pride for pleasure like your penis when u jerk it
your rhymes are like a current
...whens theres no complete circuit!
HAHA...GUD PUNCH...WUDVE BIN FIRE IF U HAD BETA SET-UP...8/10
Got you SHOCKED got you squeezed like bacteria when your zit popping
squeezing ass cheeks together
...is the only good shit u be droppin!
SHIT LINES R PLAYED BUT IT WOZ ORIGINAL...6/10


FUSE

your lyrics are O.K. i didnt know you had it in you.//
your name speaks for itself not to continue//
2ND LINE OK...BUT THA FIRST U JUS GVE HIM PROPS 5/10
Your a hoe nigga, ya'll all the same.//
i can tell you love me by how many times you used my name.//
BLAH...NOTHIN THERE...PLAYED PUNCH 3/10
in all your bars your lackin.//
your name is also a rock band so stop rappin.//
WACK...VERY BASIC...3/10
you say you got me shocked so i guess i'm energized.//
by the time you done readin i'll have you teary eyed.//
BETA WORDPLAY..STILL WEAK PUNCH 6/10
I'm ya daddy so best belive i'ma spank you.//
Your mom gave me head advice so tell her thank you.//
PLAYED TO FUCK....NO ORIGINALITY 3/10

FUSE 20/50....played lines,hardly any wordplay...only thing decent woz flow,apart from that it looked like it had bin wrote in 1 minute....ELEVATE#

SPORADIC 35/50...good wordplay flippin off his name,although u did go on a bit 2 much on his name,u shudve done sumert else as well.
sum gud punches...id say set them up beta n theyll hit harder.....overall fairly solid,nice structure/flow.......decent drop

vote-sporadic

I FEEL YA 2 SPARADIC COS FUSE WAS LAME,U WON THIS EASY...N ANY DECENT MC WUD TELL YA THA SAME...
 
Old 07-12-04, 01:16 PM   #2
sporadic
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u both cant be serious.!!! are u reading the same drop that i was..wack ass faggots..lets get some REAL votes!!
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Rapbattlesuk= Sporadic 3-0 BigChase

RapWarz 1-2 Punch League= Sporadic 3-0 Big Chase

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Old 07-12-04, 01:38 PM   #3
flow2crazy
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aight well hers my vote

Spor: u gots ta work on ur structure but ur vocab is pretty good... some ok personals in there... not too many multis 6/10

Fuse:aight verse wit a weak vocab n missin some personals but otherwise it was an ok verse 7/10

v/fuse

fav line:you say you got me shocked so i guess i'm energized.
by the time you done readin i'll have you teary eyed
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Old 07-13-04, 05:00 AM   #4
sporadic
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whas this follow the leader..are u lot reading the same drop that i did!!..if fuse wins im taking this to the admin coz this is really fucking pathetic
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Old 07-13-04, 08:56 AM   #5
sporadic
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justice is done...upps..if you dont understand the wordplay in my verse then i will explain
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Rapbattlesuk= Sporadic 3-0 BigChase

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Old 07-14-04, 06:23 PM   #6
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~Sporadic~

This herb reFUSE's to spit first so he can feed on my lyrical creation
coz he lacks in interlect,
...and an active battle imagination
^Ha ha great personal, good open^

Your static just not going anywhere, while my elevation is persistant
your talent is like ur avatar character,
...fake and nonexistant
^Nice hard hitting punch^

can tell hes a herb by his basic rhymes the name emcee u abuse
shock him with lyrical voltage
...call me a electric surge the way this fuse
^Nice bar^

taking dignity, strangle your pride for pleasure like your penis when u jerk it
your rhymes are like a current
...whens theres no complete circuit!
^Best bar so far haha nice punch^

Got you SHOCKED got you squeezed like bacteria when your zit popping
squeezing ass cheeks together
...is the only good shit u be droppin!
^Lol dark close^

~Fuse~

your lyrics are O.K. i didnt know you had it in you.//
your name speaks for itself not to continue//
^Poor opener, poor punch^

Your a hoe nigga, ya'll all the same.//
i can tell you love me by how many times you used my name.//
^Poor bar man losing this battle already^

in all your bars your lackin.//
your name is also a rock band so stop rappin.//
^Again punchs are not hitting at all&

you say you got me shocked so i guess i'm energized.//
by the time you done readin i'll have you teary eyed.//
^Nice bar best so far^

I'm ya daddy so best belive i'ma spank you.//
Your mom gave me head advice so tell her thank you.//
^Nice close^

~Sporadic~ merked this kid easy, don't think the other
people who voted looked at the battle. Sporadic creativity
was on top as well as his wordplay, punchs and flow droped
a good verse man,,..

~Fuse~ Only thing you really had was flow and two ok
punch's very basic verse man need to get elevating your
shit. wasn't to bad but Sporadic won this in ever department.

Vote ~ Sporadic
 
Old 07-16-04, 07:34 AM   #7
sporadic
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this is over a week old..upping to get this finished so i can get outta this stupid ass front line herb shit
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Old 07-17-04, 08:40 AM   #8
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upp again..i promise to return the favour for any of your battles...
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Old 07-18-04, 08:10 AM   #9
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upping this theard..want to get this done..since ive been robbed by sin the bastard
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Old 07-18-04, 03:53 PM   #10
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Upping i will vote on ur battles..and i have voted on pplz battles now come on close this shit
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Old 07-20-04, 01:26 PM   #11
sporadic
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mmmmmmmm yeah great....oh yeah upping this theard again!!
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Old 07-21-04, 09:20 AM   #12
sporadic
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cum on i promise to return the vote to ur battles..if its well explained of course
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Old 07-21-04, 10:40 AM   #13
ibraheem
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let me analyis it

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Sporadic

This herb reFUSE's to spit first so he can feed on my lyrical creation
coz he lacks in interlect,
...and an active battle imagination
ok nothing great 5/10

Your static just not going anywhere, while my elevation is persistant
your talent is like ur avatar character,
...fake and nonexistant
nice imagination 7/10

can tell hes a herb by his basic rhymes the name emcee u abuse
shock him with lyrical voltage
...call me a electric surge the way this fuse
good personal 7/10

taking dignity, strangle your pride for pleasure like your penis when u jerk it
your rhymes are like a current
...whens theres no complete circuit!
nice but no conection between the lines 6/10

Got you SHOCKED got you squeezed like bacteria when your zit popping
squeezing ass cheeks together
...is the only good shit u be droppin!
ok aint great 6/10

31/50
6.2/10 nice overall good imagination used the name well flow was ok good punches

Fuse

your lyrics are O.K. i didnt know you had it in you.//
your name speaks for itself not to continue//
ok 5/10

Your a hoe nigga, ya'll all the same.//
i can tell you love me by how many times you used my name.//
wack didnt feel it 4/10

in all your bars your lackin.//
your name is also a rock band so stop rappin
hummm??? 4/10

you say you got me shocked so i guess i'm energized.//
by the time you done readin i'll have you teary eyed.//
nice punch 7/10

I'm ya daddy so best belive i'ma spank you.//
Your mom gave me head advice so tell her thank you.//
gay didnt feel it at all 4/10

24/50
4.8/10
flow was wack had some punches aint that hard though like on personal thats about it

have to give my vote to sporadic for the use of imagination and coming harder
with respect for both of you

hit my battles if u feel bored for retern of favor

peace
 
Old 07-21-04, 10:42 AM   #14
Ice Pick
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Vote sporadic, his shit was plain and simple better,

Could have been a better battle.

Fuse sounded like he was reading a nursery ryhme or somthing, to basic and not enough to win the battle
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Old 07-21-04, 10:46 AM   #15
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Sporadic

This herb reFUSE's to spit first so he can feed on my lyrical creation
coz he lacks in interlect,
...and an active battle imagination
ok nothing great 6/10

Your static just not going anywhere, while my elevation is persistant
your talent is like ur avatar character,
...fake and nonexistant
nice imagination 6/10

can tell hes a herb by his basic rhymes the name emcee u abuse
shock him with lyrical voltage
...call me a electric surge the way this fuse
good personal 8/10

taking dignity, strangle your pride for pleasure like your penis when u jerk it
your rhymes are like a current
...whens theres no complete circuit!
nice but no conection between the lines 5/10

Got you SHOCKED got you squeezed like bacteria when your zit popping
squeezing ass cheeks together
...is the only good shit u be droppin!
ok aint great 6/10

31/50


Fuse

your lyrics are O.K. i didnt know you had it in you.//
your name speaks for itself not to continue//
ok 4/10

Your a hoe nigga, ya'll all the same.//
i can tell you love me by how many times you used my name.//
wack didnt feel it 3/10

in all your bars your lackin.//
your name is also a rock band so stop rappin
hummm??? 3/10

you say you got me shocked so i guess i'm energized.//
by the time you done readin i'll have you teary eyed.//
nice punch 7/10

I'm ya daddy so best belive i'ma spank you.//
Your mom gave me head advice so tell her thank you.//
gay didnt feel it at all 4/10


21 out of 50


that is my break down it didnt all fit for some reason
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