SHIT! I think Gee squased em, well no, because Ex had some decent punches but GEE just came at em bar after bar after bar! Gee just came harder

v/Gee

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aight here it goes....

opener - gee
closer - gee
structure - gee
flow - gee
personals - gee hit harder
metaz - gee
punchlines - gee
creativity - gee
wordplay - definatly gee
vocab - a winder rage used by gee

not that ex had a bad verse his structure was wack but it wasnt such a bad verse just that gee had a better verse.

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Hmmm.....

Ex.....I wasn't really feeling it. Your punches were kinda weak in this one. You had a an OK flow, but I hate the structure. I think your problem was you were worried more about multis and forgot to throw a decent punch. Keep Elevating....

Gee was OK. He had a few nice punches in the beginning, but soon fell off. He had an OK flow and wit wasn't bad. I was just really disappointed with the bulk of his verse. I think he took this though with his first few lines....

Vote - Gee

opener - gee
closer - gee
structure - gee
flow - gee
personals - gee
metaz - gee
punchlines - gee
creativity - gee
wordplay -gee
vocab - gee(i thought this catagory was pretty close)
ex your structure n flow i was'nt feelin much some of your punchs were aight,but i was feelin gee's verse alot more with the humour n all,i thought it was close in most catagories but found gee came out with the better drop overall..vote/gee

where all mah votes at? Yall voted fa me but not on the poll

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this was close...
exo..you had a pretty good drop..had some punches that were decent..the noway yawon line was plain witty...props..structure could have been better...flow was aight...
keep elavatin...

gee..good drop also..had ok structure flow was aight..work on your voacb...
..punches hit harder..because you came more personal...

overall..gee took this...he had more personals and personals wins battles...
but good drop from both..props

v/gee

he think he has style with a name like GEE
your time and raps "sold out like vending machines"
good opener..hit strong 7/10
i see the truth in your sig and as a matter of facts
its like a earth quake....this uneven match
whack punchline..type weak 5/10
lets start the sonin'....
when spittin flames a ton,U stupid herb! i'll evade ur puns
even if U 'look at it backwards' theres NoWay-YaWon!*
umm..the first line was trash..the second was good 6/10
fuck ya record ,ya style needs elevation so i'll noose this guy
your leaft with out pride...
U more 'full of yourself' than cannibalistic suicides
ehh...weak punchline..didnt like..4/10
u'll be ripped in an instance,u can see how distant the win is
gettin personal....?
oh well i'll cross the line then pick the shit up n haunt u with it
type weak..didnt like it..whack whack..4/10
so you from sacramento where the govinator is crakin
and you taking the win is like the kings winning...
...it wont happen
lmao..whack ender...not funny..but funny inna whack way..4/10

30/60

He says he's a "genius", he spelled his name with extra "O's"/
ta make up for praises he doesnt get in tha votes.
good opener..good personal..8/10
This bitch is an "ex-genius", I X'd out your life son.
like a game of tic tac toe, I get the "O's", and I won.
another personal..of his name..gettin whack..5/10
This doo is a fag, gettin fucked is part of your schedule/
always be tellin me, "I want the dick perpetual."
ehh..just a spacer..not good..4/10
It's "Ludicrous", even your grin showing/
your bf leave you with "pains" cuz his dick "growing*"!
lmao wtf..das juss homo..whack..5/10
Like SP, I get high like mountain climbers/
this guy "still" wouldnt be "fly", if he was Baby on the Big Tymers.
ehhh..alright punchline..alright..6/10
It's all twisted like Mobb Deep, if you think youre gonna prevail/
that's like you tellin me, youre attracted to females.
stop with the rapper punchlines..its too easy..5/10
So this guy is gonna dress up like a girl, I'll see you on the pop charts/
I roasted, toasted, and ate this bitch like he was a poptart.
not a good closer..u needa a "bang" to make a good closer..5/10

38/60

Vote-GEE
Can yall please vote on my current battle, heres the link, please!:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133085

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Mike Hawk is a wackass......

Damn can I get some real votes on the poll and not only on the forum...

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exogenious
structure was ok...some of ur lines were mad short though...flow fell off a little...u had no good metas...wordplay was alright...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals...

GEE
dont put the "" around ur words or the /s at the end of ur lines...its newbish...structure is good...flow is on target...u had some metas...wordplay was decent...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
both had decent wordplay...neither had good personals...GEE had the better structure...the more stable flow...more metas...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...GEE gets my vote...

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig...thanx...