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07-10-04, 10:56 AM
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Thanks for the feedback...
uppin for more votes... leave links |
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07-11-04, 10:16 PM
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Uppin some more....lets get some votes in here....
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07-12-04, 08:38 PM
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Alright.....lets get some more votes up in here.......
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07-12-04, 08:45 PM
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eB: You need to come with the instinct that your going to battle. You were spittin, but you just werent hittin anything. You really didnt even have any punches, i mean sayin the AC needs turned on is just a self praising line...which dont work as a punch. You gotta try to do something to put the other people down. Try some wordplay to catch peoples attention, then come back with a hard punch in the same bar. Flow was also a lil off, you had some short lines and some long lines it just wasnt workin.
.gunit: Pretty nice verse, some wordplay to set up your punches, good structure overall and pretty nice flow. Wasnt too hard for you to take this battle. I take it this was your first battle on here? Not too bad. v/.gunit P.S: You forgot to poll on one of my votes..lol |
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07-13-04, 12:32 PM
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this is gona have to go to gunit101, strongr all round, flow structur multies, and punches, the oter guys jus wack
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