Both of ya was aight, but i din't get the flow of black plague, you had some aight shit but one man had better punches

I think you both could have done better

my vote goes to one man

lol... yeah I tend to do that a lot... underestimating my opponents.. then i dont go personal or i just give up on punches halfway..lol.. ah well

uppin though

one

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nah shit... i forgot bout that sig thing.. wasnt that good a punch anyway.. but..

"first there was the beat. Then the beat became god." - Kenny Muhammed

was in my sig before i changed it.. for the voters

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Pretty tight battle...one of the best ive seen in a while.

One-Man-Band always comes hard...never underestimates opponents<---thats how it should be.

One-Man-Band: Some of the best multies that you can get. I counted syllables were right on track, flow was good. I just wasnt feelin all the punches, I thought you coulda been more consistent with the dope ones, as well a little more personal with it. Cause he was on top of you in the personals. The metas were alright in some spots, just was kinda hit and miss. Dope verse though.

The Black Plague: Nice flow and solid structure, was consistent through your verse. I did think you started off a lil slow, but you picked up pace with your punches pretty fast, and they were hard, personal and hit. Need to imply in some of the multies it really helps flow a lot. Metas were nice, i hadnt heard a lot of the concepts and creativity that you were using.

Was a pretty close battle, but I think Black takes it marginally.

v/The Black Plague

ok, first of all.. the first 2 lines of bands verse were pretty weak.. i had a hard time trying to rhyme laugh and av, unless you were saying it like 'arv' but that wouldnt of worked.. second 2 lines were well written, except his verse did have personals so that sort of in-validated those 2..
it got better from there, the wannabe vet line was good, the non-herb rhyme was good, finisher wasnt amazing.

black plague, opener was good, second bar, waaaay too many syllables, and the pinchline wasnt amazing either. the third bar used a personal that was annoying, cuz i dont think you knew what you were talking about, the guy who said it was a beat boxer, sort of needed to know that if you were gonna use it as a personal... the next bar, top line was good, but it finished bad.. and your finisher was pretty weak..

i cant stress how important it is too have a good finisher, its the last thing the voters see, u need to leave them thinking it was dope. u both had weak finishers..

but im gonna give this vote to one-man-band.. in all honesty he won this (only just tho)

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one man band- ya spit was ok..............i think you focused on multis to much and not worried about the punches you had......to me it seemed like ya verse was pre-written cuz......cut this rook-inta-half......he just a wannabe-vet....you called him a fake vet and a rookie in the same........

The Black Plague- ya shit was straight too even though ya lignes were stretched out alot.........you got my vote on this though becuz of ya punches..they werent hittin as hard as they could but they was ok.......you can do betta man.......

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