tourn
ya fake bitch...there must be a glitch in ya ass cause imma tax it
i'm overduein wackness..just to let everyone know i'm feelin Drastic
^nah...not hard-hittin...no real punchline...

your raps' shit...but this is legit when i'm tearin "Folks Up"
cuz the only "Slobz Down" is this fucks sloppy sketches he drew up
^nope....

As i threw up i spit out dudes' rhymes in a ziplock ...
but your shits so old..it made ya freshest seem like classic rock
^bleh...atleast its a punchline

i'm here to block ya advancement as if i coldhearted teacher
cuz ya held back like little boys after a service w/ a preacher
^not hard-hittin...

Drastic's a leacher and i'm not feedin this weary fool
then again the back of cerial is the best of his material
^nah...

Drastic
'll "shread" you to pieces concider yaself "tourn"//
A loss fa you is my thesis youll need ya record reborn//
^2nd line was lacking..atleast the first one was a personal...

Sworn into secrecy cuz ya decentcy's nowhere near hot//
He's stupid thinkin-he's a real mc when money for his rhymes tha only thang hes got//
^meh...atleast der better than the first guys

In this battle you're a dirty cause nothin but flaws//
Youre an "attach on" (d/r) like "shit stains" in "dirty draws"//
^coo....its pickin up

"PAUSE" so we can take a quick "moment of silence"//
Cuz ya flows is off track go ask ya "counsoler" for "guidence"//
^nice...we're gettin sumwhere...

Violence....................is all i bring up to tha plate//
Ya punches are played so "when in" this battle "winnin" became my fate//
^filler...

Face to face ya bitch out as ya mumble and stutter with falter//
Watch yo rhymes get dismembered as thier "presence" gets "altered"//
^coo...


Overall: Drastic takes it hands down.

Return the favour and drop honest votes on my battle plz. thx.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135882

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