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View Poll Results: Do You Think This Piece Is Worthy Of "Open Mic Of July"???...
Yes 17 94.44%
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Old 07-21-04, 09:43 AM   #1
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Old 07-21-04, 04:57 PM   #2
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i gotcha bro here ya go
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Old 07-21-04, 12:40 PM   #3
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Anything with as bad of structure this has cant be open mic of the month...
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Old 07-21-04, 12:47 PM   #4
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Nice word play. Was really feeln da imagery u was puttin on. thought i was there for a moment. One of da best heard

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Old 07-21-04, 12:54 PM   #5
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shit was definetly deep i felt it shit hot kid goodluck winnin u got sum good skillz style different but dat wut da game need n am i rite? well peace out nice drop 8 outta 10
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Old 07-21-04, 01:15 PM   #6
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that was exclusive continue to do your thing
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Old 07-21-04, 01:53 PM   #7
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man...wow.. like every one else said, this was mad hot, the vocab and imagery were killa, i could practically feel the anger of your words...man i was really feelin this piece, hell yeah this should be fuckin open mic of tha month indefinitely..
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Old 07-21-04, 04:19 PM   #8
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that was good, really deep and excellent use of vocab, In my opinion worthy of open mic of the month
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Old 07-21-04, 04:54 PM   #9
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Damn Atticus, u continue to impress..... love the song, the vocab, and the way u put it together. feelin the flow. U always out do yaself, keep up the good, drown the bad.... hahahahahahah, holla
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Old 07-22-04, 10:56 AM   #10
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Thanks For All The Props...
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Old 07-22-04, 02:30 PM   #11
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nice shit man...really deep nice tory...only bad thing....2 long...lmao....good lookin bro.....yo man you know raw killa check lyricist lounge that bitch....lmao............he said im not even on his level......
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Old 07-22-04, 04:18 PM   #12
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hot shit dawg...very nice. ur skills are mad hot. better here than 6. haha...get at me though. peace
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Old 07-22-04, 07:37 PM   #13
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Old 07-22-04, 08:26 PM   #14
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This was good. A little stretched, but for an OM, that's not a bad thing, cause u had a lot to say. Lost the capitalizing every word, doesn't really work for yas. It had some good imagery which is needed in every OM. I really felt this piece. Good wordplay. I don't know what passes for Hall of Fame round here, but the shit was dope. Keep elevatin'.

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