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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
String9487 1 16.67%
schema 5 83.33%
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Old 07-26-04, 04:31 PM   #16
Hitchcock
 
IP: B9AB 64CC

ight just vote idc if i won nemore lol this mess is takin forever i need to close this joint
 
Old 07-28-04, 01:58 PM   #17
B-MAC
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From: Halifax, Canada
IP: 212C BA1E

i dont usually battle noobs but ones about to get clapped
hadnt seen him till i peeped his 50 thousand posts on bitch slapped

Good Opener, Aight Personal...

you pretty confident for someone that flows as herb as you
but if youre so damn good then how come i aint heard of you

Aight Again... Nothing special..

you know dudes a 'i live in my moms basement' rapper
ill leave this string twisted up worse then a jacobs ladder

Good Line..

always talkin bout guns...all he can do is basic rappin
aint got no heat but his boy the smiley face is packin

I liked this One.. Punch.... could have been worded a little Different

youre all gangster in ya rhymes but you shouldnt try and bring that out
cause on the real i bet a cat could prolly bat this string around

Weak...

so warning...string is in the building...hes hazardous to real
herb you put me to sleep so ima call you chamomile

Aight Line.. wasnt Feeling that Much...

your wacker then hell..and yo im talkin the place
cause id prolly get set on fire 'fore i copped this kids tape

Not bad...

this cat just talks about him...his gun his chain his blouse his town
take that shit to open mic...its like three houses down

Was not really Feeling this One...

your in a battle now so get ya head down in the game
you couldnt even find a personal that clowned on my name

aight, Could have been Better

much as you try to hide it you still come across a yungun fam
everyone knows strings dont shoot...you aint no rubber band


I rate this Verse 4/10... It was aight verse, the Punches should have been worded different, to Directly Hit him.. But it was ok...

Good Battle Guys..

VOTE: Schema......
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Old 07-29-04, 04:15 PM   #18
Hitchcock
 
IP: B9AB 64CC

uppin for votes holla at me n i'll return the favor
 
Old 07-29-04, 09:17 PM   #19
Hitchcock
 
IP: B9AB 64CC

uppin for votes holla at me n i'll return the favor
 
Old 07-30-04, 02:05 PM   #20
Hitchcock
 
IP: B9AB 64CC

uppin for votes i need to get this battle closed holla at me n i'll return the favor
 
Old 07-31-04, 12:22 AM   #21
Hitchcock
 
IP: B9AB 64CC

uppin for votes i need to get this battle closed holla at me n i'll return the favor
 
Old 07-31-04, 03:57 AM   #22
Magic5
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From: Denver, CO
IP: 6EB9 28C9

String9487
structure is way too simple man...flow was on target...u had a few multis...wordplay was wack...none of ur punches connected...no good personals...

schema
dont space out ur bars...structure is good...flow is on target...no multis...wordplay was pretty good...some of ur punches connected...decent personals...

Overall
String9487 had more multis...both had a stable flow...schema had the better structure...better wordplay...more connecting punches...and better personals...so basing off of that...schema gets my vote...

VOTE - SCHEMA
 
 


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