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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
The Black Plague 5 62.50%
schema 3 37.50%
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Old 07-26-04, 11:14 PM   #16
mistah_tate
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schema, i wasnt really feelin your flow, when i read your verse it didnt come together to well, you had decent punches but they dont mean nothin when they cant come together, your structure was pretty good

bp, you didnt seem like you put alot of effort into what you wrote, but thats just me. i liked the way your shit came together, you had some ok punches and good structure, you were also pretty consistent through out the whole verse

so my vote goes to Black Plague
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Old 07-27-04, 11:41 AM   #17
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Uppin this shit...
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Old 07-27-04, 01:58 PM   #18
The Black Plague
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God damn people, just vote...

Drop links and i will return the favor
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Old 07-27-04, 02:05 PM   #19
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schema you had good flow and nice punches. some nice personals too. Black your flow was quite stretched and a few of the punches were more like lunges.
no real personals.

vote: schema

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Old 07-27-04, 02:49 PM   #20
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The Black Plauge
Imma treat this kid like salted peanut shells, and get him off my nuts
He been rydin my dick since he been on this site, cuz he got no guts
ok...
After i merk his ass ya'll know he'll bitch and complain, sayin i pre writ
But i already dropped this little dick and jus about half of his clit clique*
alright better
"Elevator goin up"? Haha, thats cuz this kid's afraid to get on my level
Fuckin pussy, i seen more man this mornin in my bowl of fruity pebbles
lol alright
You really think you "lethal"? Kid i'll judge your " Sinz", u can call me god**
And send you down here to " hell" where i merk you niggas like its my job
1st line good 2nd glorification
He wonders why his battles get slept on... cuz u lull these cats to sleep
6-2, he think he dope, but naw nigga u "got it twisted" like mobb deep
ok
I'm KO'in this fool, this the worse a nigga got beatdown since rod King
Kid im simply devourin you, eatin you up quickly like hot barbeque wings
ummm alright couldve been better
Man im jus smarter than u, i'd have more brain power if i had a labotemy***
You could spit ya verse 20 mins before me and still not be on top of me
lol good

nice drop you fell off in some parts but overall alright drop
you had some good punches and personals



S

i write my raps with wordpad you write yours with search engines
damn how can i change this around so it sounds like i said it
ummm...sorry but this is wack
your structures fucked and ya rhymes im not feelin
watch me wipe this black plague the fuck out like penicillin
ok

oh you from hell? tell satan i got some more mc's for 'im
nothin personal...i KO all the fake g's on the forum
no punch here

everyone knows the only reason you named after bubonic plague
is cause you leakin blood out ya ass down between ya legs
alright better

the black plague comin back again? shit we didnt see this comin
oh thats why his punches so played...hes from the fifteen hundreds
lol ok

i know your not used to gettin l's but have one...its on me kid
hold on while i tell datruth that i just merked you worse than he did
ok..no punch

you only had one bar i liked so the rest of your verse was not that
great hardly any punches or personals

v/TBP
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