Thanx and Uppin this..
God Front Lines Is Dead Thanx To That Wack Ass New System.
Pz.

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ok.

maku-structure/flow i thought was ok.#
punches were average,nothin really hard hittin
i think your personals were weak...coz i found them to be played/n not very hard hittin.
rascal.all round beta verse really.u came harder with the punches.u had some gud meatas as well..n ur wordplay/creativity was jus a notch above maku

vote rascal

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You guys gotta be shittin me!!! There is no way that Ras verse was better than Mak's.

Ras forced his *ahem* "flow" through the whole battle... the shyt didn't rhyme properly (also forced), and if ya ask me it was very elementary.

EX: figure of eight and self portraits doesn't rhyme... period! I don't care where ya from or how you twist ya accent... that shit's a no-go!

wack as fuck then/prove it to them... another forced couple of lines/rhymes.

I agree that he had personals but that was about it. It means nothing if you have to force ya flow and ya rhymes.


MAKU:

Tell me why i'm like this, rascal, what nut could've mothered this sick shit?//
Better question: Who else from england is nice
other than slick rick?//
English emcee? you'll go from the best shitty rapper//
to an oscar award winning, homosexual actor//
It's funny all this disrespect that you got fam//
when you said.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Rascal
do you wanna batle?you got good potential and could help me Elevate alot man

This killed Rascals whole verse. The opener was weak but he picked up momentum as he went along... and there's nothing worse for an opponent than when you use his own words aginst him.

I don't know if my vote counts or not but if it does I gotta say Maku got this hands down! Better structure, flow, and the main thing was that it actually rhymed.
No hate Ras, but ya got more than enough time to elevate ya game... keep at it.

aight, uppin 4 votes on this one...Leave a link to your battle and i'll vote on yours, to return the favor.

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yo maku u took it, dat shit was a good battle but wen it came to structure u took it man, rascal ur punches were ok but maku hit harder


v/Maku