Voted For: raw killa

First verseunches were ok but could been about any1, gotta have more personals,used self-glorification too often,lack of multis,didnt really like first verse...

Second verse:multis were pretty good,punches were nice,personals ok...u need some work on ur structure but overall nice drop!

So my vote goes to second verse...(raw killa)

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Voted For: Da Jokah

jokah had tight personals and hard punches...ur lines werent streatched and were tight....u busted in a few lines which made it cool....word play(9)...structure was decent too....gd job

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Voted For: raw killa

raw won dat shit, Joker wanna talk about crips an bloods raw jess eat his ass up plain an simple

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Tha Battle (Tech Skillz Diss 2)
Tech Skillz Diss
Fuk Tha Rules

yes sum1 who finally agrees wit me dude(dis@da jokah)dis a battle not a gang war cuz 1 i aint crip i told u i hate them n support bloodz back in jersey i aint in it i jus support them the rest of ya thanx 4 da votes xxxtasy i kno u messed up on ur vote but its kool still love ya holla back more votes c'mon peace uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^

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Voted For: Da Jokah

it was ok up to, got yo momma i grind it light wit dat ass//
u look like a bitch that i took to the bar//
couldnt read ur mind till it was all over the car//
Blood up crips down a thug gon stalk on u//
raw-meat hangin out the side of his neck//
cut out his tounge and use that shit to wype the deck//
this bwoi is selfish...he eastin but tell me no feedinn//
fuck it..
ill cut his stomach open eat tha food and leave him bleedin//
iam a nasty nigga that take shit i want and keep needin//
bloods up crabz down..dont know wen a thug chalk on u//
nigga ill knock u out then ill blood walk on u//

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i did'nt understand you jokah at all ,maybe u need to fix that.

iight mayne no doubt..uppin this.....

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sry nigga no hatin but fo real those 2 votes u got were mistakes yo verse tight n all but so far every1 who pm'd me bout it who made da mistake's said they wanted 2 really vote me cuz ur verse well more gangsta rap than battle rap 4 1 2 i was jus sicker all love though good luck nigga blood in blood out homie 1 luv peace out holla back

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uppin this

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uppin this shit

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Voted For: raw killa

Punches- Raw
Flow- Raw
Wordplay- Tie
Meta- Niether
Structure- Da Jokah
Originality- Da Jokah
Multis- Raw

Final Vote Raw Killa

Return Favor With Honest Vote:
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...77&page=1&pp=15

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thank u peeps of rb 4 da replies n votes jus need 1 more n ill finally get a fair win since my las battle wit eye turned out 2 his win since da las vote i needed couldnt have been made since da dude who said wut he did bout dunno who was but w/.e n e ways w/e good battle eye we both kno we good but deep down ya kno i had dat battle but yea w/e good job.....uppin dis shit holla back^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

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