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DOT 5 55.56%
ShackleS 4 44.44%
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Old 08-13-04, 01:45 PM   #1
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Wierd battle
dot ya flow was good and so was ya stucture both of youu need to elevate alot
shackles your verse was good but i didnt really understand
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Old 08-14-04, 11:07 AM   #2
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Uppin for votes agian......remeber you need to vote on tha pole aswell ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
 
Old 08-14-04, 03:29 PM   #3
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man i still can't belive im uppin this shyt remember whoever posts a honest vote on here i'll return tha favour with a honest vote.
 
Old 08-14-04, 09:33 PM   #4
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Voted For: DOT

give it 2 DOT not
alot of punches but more den
SHACKLES but he had da better
flow n structure but da metas
n punches u had won u da battles
 
Old 08-14-04, 09:40 PM   #5
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Originally Posted by DRAG~ON
Voted For: DOT

give it 2 DOT not
alot of punches but more den
SHACKLES but he had da better
flow n structure but da metas
n punches u had won u da battles



my fault yo vote on deez battles
please n honest votes ppl.

DRAG~ON VS V0cab
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141251

DON(topical)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139290

definatfully(punchline)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142312

G
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142212

Jono
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142463
 
Old 08-15-04, 06:44 AM   #6
Kayem
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uppin for more votes evry1^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
 
Old 08-15-04, 11:09 AM   #7
Kayem
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Uppin for more votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
 
Old 08-16-04, 07:50 AM   #8
Kayem
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uppin this shyt^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
 
Old 08-16-04, 02:24 PM   #9
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Voted For: ShackleS

VOte shackles, clearly with wordplay, punches, flow, and basically a desacent read

DOT STRAIGHT TO THE POINT, you need to elevate and bring better vocab and punches


Hit this up

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Old 08-16-04, 02:28 PM   #10
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Voted For: DOT

This battle was pretty even, but Dot came with harder punches, nice finisher too. ShackleS, what happened? I've seen you come harder than that before...No hate though, good battle.
Vote - DOT

Return the favor, honest votes only:
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Old 08-17-04, 02:06 PM   #11
Kayem
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uppin again^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
 
Old 08-18-04, 08:31 AM   #12
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well his verse was more complex than shackles, shacke had some stuff, some good punchlines, but bit him on da ass hard this battle
 
Old 08-19-04, 10:57 AM   #13
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Voted For: ShackleS

Dot - you had an alright flow, stucture was coo, rhyme scheme was pretty basic and there were no real personals or hard hittin punches, so i give you a 6/10

shackels - you also had great stucture, nice smooth flowing rhymes, no real personals, but like 1 or 2 punches that were ok, 1 or 2 more than him so i give you a 7/10

shackels therefore i vote for you..

please retutn favor, heres the link..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143508
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Old 08-19-04, 11:22 AM   #14
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Voted For: ShackleS

shackles took this...

but shakles but your whole verse together do not seperate throguh the lines that slows the flow down when the reader is reading it... but overall nice punches they connected nice wordplay... his name was DOT i'm suprised u didn't incorporate that in there but good...

flow-DOT
punches Shack
Creativity- Shack

v/ Shackles


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Old 08-19-04, 11:51 AM   #15
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Voted For: DOT

Ayo foreal, dot was nice, and shackles you was nice too, but I think dot edged you on this one. No hate it's all love, but to be totally honest. Baased on what I've seen from both of you in the past both yall shit was lacking, but dot came harder this time.
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