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View Poll Results: .:Topical Battle:....:Fluidmoon Vs MagiC:.... | |||
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5 | 71.43% |
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2 | 28.57% |
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The Light
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IP: 5104 E24D
Voted For: fluidmoon
good battle fluidmoon - i was really feeling the flow of this.. i think it ended a lil to soon, i think you should of had a middle verse in there about his dad keeping a diary also.. like one entry from it.. but it was a good job nevertheless.. i liked how it eneded with his had writing in his suns journal.. that and the flow of your verse is what really won it for me.. magic - yours seemed realistic, as well as fluidmoons.. but i didnt really connect with it as much.. the words you sometimes used to rhyme with each other. rhymed, but they didnt.. i hope you know what i mean.. like eternity and entity dont really match up well, ya know ?.. you had imagery and everything.. was a decent verse.. but i felt fluid was on top of this topic pretty well.. if you get a chance, and see one of my battles any where, jsut drop a vote or w/e.. no pressure tho props to both of you for a good topical battle
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IP: 3240 794D
up up uppin............................................. .......................1
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IP: 2041 AFC0
Thanks for the votes all,.. Up~ing
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DA FLAMETHROWER
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IP: CEF5 716F
Voted For: MagiC
damn close battle i liked fluid's meaning how he had a story but i liked MagiC's flow better n he also had a story so i gave it 2 him v/MagiC vote on my battles DRAG~ON VS ecko(crew battle) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142722 definatfully(punchline) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142312 V0cab http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141251 Jono http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142463
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IP: 2A06 53AD
Voted For: fluidmoon
damn this was a long ass battle...damn,lol....fluidmoon took this one wit nice wordplay, and nice punches and multies...nice flow...bad structure tho, too many extended lines...elevate magic nice flow, but you fell off near the end, and thats wut did it...elevate |
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IP: 66EA F6BA
Voted For: fluidmoon
Fluidmoon has my vote because she has more emotion and more word play in hers. They were both good itz just fliudmoon set it ova the top. MagIC need a lil more pratice and needs to work on the flow of his/her words
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