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pictureperfect2 2 28.57%
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Old 08-16-04, 02:59 PM   #16
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Old 08-16-04, 11:27 PM   #17
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lets get some votes on this shit
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Old 08-17-04, 01:35 PM   #18
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Old 08-18-04, 10:59 AM   #19
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dis shit gets slept on to much..lets get votes in here
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Old 08-19-04, 11:12 PM   #20
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Old 08-19-04, 11:49 PM   #21
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like the rest of ya blunts in philly, my sig tells ya your getting smoked
Im getting this dubz blazed silly, his name saw it comin, it already showed
decent personal but the punch was weak cuz u already said sumthin about it before your verse....5/10
Ya dubz, I wish I could give it to u that you’re the finest in philly, but that’d be silly
cuz even teanage mom’s know”parents just don’t understand” so haha u 2nd to big willy
the first line was straight but the second was a horrible punch...4/10
had to fuckin correct this little bitches shit, he only sick wit cancer
fuck this dumb fuck in the city of the 6ers, he still don’t have “THE ANSWER”
this is where personals go bad and come out whack...4/10
Imma leave u hangin like vinces arm in the rim, cuz ballin I speak fluently
This battle imma pretend im a NET, this bitch still could send a shot throw me
consecutive weak punch..3/10
Broke bitch getting served by me and meals on wheels
only time u got a chance for income (in cum) is as he kneels
slightly better but still pretty weak..not that good of delivery...5/10
U couldn’t serve me wit beef if your employer bk delivered
He say he got hard punches, but we see after the battle (he miss figured )
another bad punch that wasnt delivered right...5/10


so you can bet when you see dubz, you gonna see the fifth quick
then get ripped apart quicker then an orphan'd childs christmas list
good meta and good punch...7/10
dubz rippin this nigga....... with more ‘punches’ then ‘kool-aid’
my spits is off the top of the dome like ugly......... tu-pays
lol good meta and good punch once again. really good setup..7/10
and if its beef u got.......... imma handle it one or two ways
either freestyles or puttin guns in yo mouth like toothpaste
like how u kept the same rhyme goin but it wasnt in the right place.weak punch...5/10
im so far ahead of this nigga........ when it come to dissin
so when im done u’d be lucky to....... have a pot to piss in
dont really get this one at all and the first line was self glorification..4/10
im gonna paint a 'perfect picture' like........ wes craven
my flow's so hot it'll go through u and leave yo chest achin
good personal.punch was kinda weak...6/10
with punches hittin harder then balls thrown by Tarkanton
spit my last bar leavin the competition shakin like Parkison's
ok punch kinda weak closer...5/10

pic-26/60
dubz-34/60

both can do much better. v//e-dubz
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Old 08-20-04, 01:41 AM   #22
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i dont really kno if i can
vote but i vote 4 E DUBZ
he had more wordplay n punches
n his flow was tyght so i gave it
2 him
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Old 08-20-04, 02:16 AM   #23
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dubz rippin this nigga....... with more ‘punches’ then ‘kool-aid’
my spits is off the top of the dome like ugly......... tu-pays
lol good meta and good punch once again. really good setup..7/10

umm...........your retarded phantom, u could say good meta and wordplay, but um "good punch once agian" battles are for punches and this like all his other lines weren't punches, jus metas and things he does to me. that is not a punch.

he said HE had more punches then kool aid, and that HIS spits is off the top of the dome like ugly......... tu-pays
^^^^^^^^^^ please tell me how this is making fun of me or is in anyway considered a punch.

HE DID NOT HAVE A SINGLE PUNCH IN THE ENTIRE BATTLE!!!! ya'll aint got a clue. reread his shit and tell me one thing that is makin fun of me. this is retarded, he doesn't say one bad thing about me and ya'll bitches vote for 'em. please help me understand your stupidity, someone please............. NOT A SINGLE FUCKIN PUNCH. i thought thats what battles were......this is fuckin nonesense

NOT A ONE. NOT ONE PUNCH, I DONT GET IT.
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Old 08-20-04, 02:15 PM   #24
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^u's a bitch..my whole verse is punches
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Old 08-21-04, 04:26 PM   #25
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^u's a bitch..my whole verse is punches

nope, sorry, but u dont have one punch in the whole battle..... every single line is self glorification. nice wordplay and all, but nothing was directed as a diss towards me. show me one line that is actually makin fun of me and not jus bein used as a self glorifying line.... jus one, i dare u.
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Old 08-21-04, 08:13 PM   #26
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Voted For: pictureperfect2

Pic takes this one. Good punches by edubz though. I just dont think he expanded that much in this battle. He had too many lines talking about himself. You had good structure and flow though. A lot better than pics...Pic takes it with harder punches though. Metas were alright too. Nice complex verse with some alright personals too. Verse wasnt that great, but enough to get over Edubz. Pic gets tha vote.

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Old 08-23-04, 12:12 AM   #27
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Old 08-24-04, 12:18 AM   #28
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Old 08-28-04, 12:04 AM   #29
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Old 08-29-04, 02:59 PM   #30
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props to both battlers on this one but here's the verdict

edubz-decent wordplay, nice multi usage, but your structure was a little off tho as i was reading it. but i'd give your verse a 7/10

pictureperfect-your structure was ok, but i can't stress enough, that corniness is not allowed on the battlefield, and your verse was full of it. the parents just don't understand line, was beyond corny. You gotta go at this seriously, or if not serious, then something sharp and funny you know, a below the belt funny diss. But not these corny lines. and i got onto this battle cuz you put in complaints that he didn't throw a single punch and you're losing. Nobody did you an injustice, you just didn't come serious enough, and dubz does have punches. You need elavation, no hate.
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