uppin for some votes...........


**question why does R-RAted hardly ever vote but when he does votes in your battles :-/......for you mkau Jaiiliin***

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dog...quit tryna sway votes bitch! this battle could go either way, you ain't lost yet, so hang in there, and wait for the votes to come!
i'm gettin sick of your bitchin! it's just a simple battle, and i got two votes, just two, and you got one, it can go either way, so when it's done, it's done. You don't wanna risk losin, then don't battle. Simple as that, i've battled cats with like, 10-2 records, when i was newb, and didn't fukkin complain, knowin that these cats was gettin dick road, or that i just lost! So until one of us gets the W...

son ya self.

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*** but i was just saying... its questionable***....

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Voted For: Soulless

souless won this he had decent punches that I liked the whole way through. He had nice flow and had way better word play den da other. Like the structure also so he had the best performance and was nice to read. The other verse was close but not close enough sorry

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Voted For: Soulless

aight votin on this battle to was to easy....anyway i think soulless took thid easily....maku i didnt likke ur stucture....ur flow was ok but to me it seemed half fast....u needed to up ur skills in this battle other than that u lost.....soulless u had better overall verse vocab flow everything was all there so u get my vote...

since i voted hit my battle up with dragon heres the link
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142722

Voted For: Soulless

umm easy vote.

Maku-yes i understand the style but it really wasnt working for you. punches werent that hard, personals were pretty weak, and u coulda done better on wordplay. basically im not sayin u suck, just this particular verse of urs...5/10

Soulless-once again a nice drop from soulless. ill start by askin if u got that idea for the final line from what i said to u in our battle....so did you?(pm me) anywayz nice drop i like the personals and punches a lot, structure was on point and the wordplay was decent...8/10

v//soulless
RTF..links in the sig

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Voted For: Maku JaiiLiin

DAmn Maku... ya got a lot better since I last saw you in our battle!

ya killed it with the wordplay... i still couldn't get ya flow down but it looked consistent throughout...

ya team need reality//
so wit ease i'll have Soulles sleepin with fishes,
.....like marine bestiality//
Practice from virginia snipings, gave me my aim//
but my spirit consumptional techniques, gave you ya name//

^^^ easily the best lines of the battle

s:
ya style was pretty regular... no ooomph to it at all...punches didn't hit hard enough.. you concentrated too much on his sig... that won't get you a win... one or two lines max on the sig woulda been cool if ya followed up with more potent material...no real wordplay or vocab... multi's woulda helped...maybe some metas... verse was too simple

Voted For: Soulless

ok maku ok verse good vocab lines were streched as fuck so flow was off good punches no real disses or personals 4/10
soulless good disses that make up shit was a funny as hell personal fo real good shit good flow nice structure your personals and disses combined with the few punches made this a really strong verse for this battle 8/10

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