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intensify effect 5 100.00%
optimized 0 0%
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Old 08-23-04, 09:40 PM   #1
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upp'in this old ass battle that has trouble getting votes..........
 
Old 08-27-04, 07:41 PM   #2
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uuuuuuuuppppppppppppppppppppppp'innnnnnnnnnnnnnn

will return the favor of a vote.............
 
Old 08-29-04, 09:14 AM   #3
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Okay Itwas A 10 LINE BATTLE n Effect Went Over The Limit, But His Verse Was Better Structured n He Connected The Bars Alot Better...
Couldda Hit Harder With The Punches But It Was A Nice Verse

Optimized, You Need 2 Elevate Ya Vocab n Try Diffrent Styles n Addin Humour To Ya Rhymes.....

Nice Battle Tho, Keep Em Comin My Homeboiyz..

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Old 08-29-04, 11:59 AM   #4
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upp'in....

this joint mang..................................
 
Old 08-29-04, 12:57 PM   #5
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I GOTS TO GO WITH I E WITH DIS ONE

HE HAD NICE DATS WHAT WON ME OVA
AND DA PUNCHES WERE GOOD
WORDPLAY I LIKE THAT BAR THAT STARTS WITH "DONT FUCK"

OP

U HAD GOOD FLOW BUT WORK ON DEM PUNCHES AND YO WORDPLAYS

BUT OTHER THAN THAT NICE SPIT

OP IF U WORK ON DEM PUNCHES U'LL GET BETTA

YO I E RETURN AN FAV DA LINK ITS IN DA SIG MAYNE
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Old 08-29-04, 04:05 PM   #6
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optimize...this verse was not bad but more bad then good...
flow kinda good but punches were not...u had metas but i didnt like them...pick up ur content n u should do betta...no hate...

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i c ur doing better...i liked tha word play on dat first bar...
tha one about abortion is played but u brought it original so i was feelin that...but tha rest was kinda off tho it has a good flow...its like it rhymes n sounds good but it just aint hittin as hard as u could. so bring it!

i.e. got this for flow, content n punches...

advice::u both should've came out harder...
FUCK OPTIMIZED...FUCK I.E....IM OUT!
PEACE...
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Old 08-30-04, 05:20 AM   #7
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^^^ thanks..............

i think???

upp'in for more votes
 
Old 08-30-04, 05:29 AM   #8
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both verses were good but effects stood out.....he took all cats flow was good structure was tyte....wasnt too predictable his verse made me laugh and it also made me think i like the he came wit good solid punches.....and pretty much just came harder then optimized in every aspect of the battle....much props to both battlers but my overall vote goes to.........

Vote: Intensify effect

P.s:when u get the chance vote on my battles so i can get rid of them send me links to battles u want voted on iight playa....peace
 
 


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