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Ice Pick 5 55.56%
Phantom 4 44.44%
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Old 08-18-04, 08:45 AM   #1
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upupupupupupupupupupupupupupupupupupupupupupupupup . and explain ur damn votes....
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Old 08-18-04, 01:28 PM   #2
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Old 08-18-04, 03:54 PM   #3
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Voted For: Phantom

chose winners verse....

you aint sick, ice prick, your names says your 'flows' are 'stiff'
keep grip and dont slip as i leave you hangin on an icy cliff
nice opener....good wordplay 7/10
this weak fuck freezes up when the beef heats up
its hoes down g's up, so lay down and lemme put my feet up
aight punch....kinda played 5/10
i pimp slap backwards this faggot ass rapper
toss him out the window just like a candy wrapper
basic punch...could of made it more interesting5/10
you 'pick'-ed the wrong nigga to battle, your in deep trouble
the heat that im puttin to to ya will leave u as a puddle
decent punch....needs better wordplay6/10
you battle noobs for wins, you aint one of the best
your weak, ribs shatter, lungs collapse, when you pound ya chest
nice punch....keep 'em coming7/10
i didnt even merk you, this is a murder ya loser
but its cool how your sig predicted ya future (skeleton)
dope closer....nice personal8/10

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Old 08-18-04, 05:38 PM   #4
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Old 08-19-04, 01:13 AM   #5
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up for votes . . . . .
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Old 08-19-04, 09:25 AM   #6
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i get votes dqd and you still get that wack vote HUH???

Verbally gifted is a bitch and should have dropped a better explanation

FUCKIN HERBS
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Old 08-19-04, 03:13 PM   #7
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uppin fo votes . . . .
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Old 08-19-04, 11:19 PM   #8
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Originally Posted by Ice Pick

I'm evictin'-ya-punches..best "hock ya' sPiT" for PENNIEZ at a Pawn shop
'dis Rook-ie so WEAK he couldn't "break" Knight{night} wit Bishopz on calm blockz
->>ehh..i get the chess theme but its a forced multi which im not a fan of

battlin' PICKS dropz??.Phantom U pUUssy.."douche" ya' Raw sPiTz
cause da only place U bringin' da FUNK bitch from is ya' Arm-Pitz
->>been done before but it was pretty cool

assault U with Speed Stickz 'til ya' fate is a (Right) Guard-ed Secret like passwords
I leave you like avy only its TUPAC spelled backwards
->>other than structure it was cool...second line was nice...creative stuff

Smash ur bladder-quick-into-waste. Corny ass style, half-tha-shit-ends-up-paste(d).
Give u a window of opportunity and shatter-it-in-yo-face! kid
->>forced internal multi in first line...you didnt need it you should have left it out...other than that decent punch

My sik shotz produce-da-(blood)Stainz.."water" ya MELON..got Fruit-fa-Brainz
but couldn't gain CLEARANCE.."infringe" upon ICE and i'll nuke-ya-frame
->>ehh...i dunno you came from too many directions it was confusing...it was like an ADD bar

recoup-da-LOOT-of-lamez who clearly aren't ready to "Pay-da-Price"
in 'dis Community, i'm Godly..when we battle, U pray to- ICE
->>nah...


Rip ya verse-on-will, u ain't a 3rd-my-skill. PICK curse-until blood is shed, got a thirst-4-kills..
Stop ridin my jock bitch..askin bout me, I'm type "person-ill." [personal]
->>i didnt understand the second line ...first line was all multis not a lot of substance

This hoe-disses-me.. man, theres no-escape-from-tha-kill..
Nunchucks like rotisserie when they "rotate-on-ya-grill."
->>haha creative as hell...niiice

->>you have a lot of creativity but when you do filler it comes off weak...if you put in filler it needs to jive with the rest of your verse you cant switch the style up in your filler or it draws all the attention to it...overall this was a mediocre verse but when you are good in a line youre fire...im looking forward to seeing really good things out of you. Once you get to the 'every line is a hot line' stage youll be unstoppable. you did have enough for the win here though[/b]



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you aint sick, ice prick, your names says your 'flows' are 'stiff'
keep grip and dont slip as i leave you hangin on an icy cliff
->>nah...weak opener

this weak fuck freezes up when the beef heats up
its hoes down g's up, so lay down and lemme put my feet up
->>this was filler...you gotta hit him hard esp in a battle this short

i pimp slap backwards this faggot ass rapper
toss him out the window just like a candy wrapper
->>this was filler too...get personal you couldve said this to anybody

you 'pick'-ed the wrong nigga to battle, your in deep trouble
the heat that im puttin to to ya will leave u as a puddle
->>you already did the ice/heat connection earlier in this battle...fillerish

you battle noobs for wins, you aint one of the best
your weak, ribs shatter, lungs collapse, when you pound ya chest
->>nah...

i didnt even merk you, this is a murder ya loser
but its cool how your sig predicted ya future (skeleton)
->>first decent personal in your verse...this was my fav bar out of yours

->>real average verse here...read the tutorial about personals...you have to come harder than that unless youre gonna battle noobs...it was a nice try but it just wasnt enough for the win here
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Old 08-19-04, 11:24 PM   #9
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Voted For: Phantom

my vote is for phantom: hes was better to understand and as better word play. Ice Pick u need to work on ur flow ALOT!
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Old 08-19-04, 11:27 PM   #10
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yeah on the real this was the first battle where i used this style i.e. sacrificing good punches for multis. obviously it doesnt work for me....
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Old 08-19-04, 11:31 PM   #11
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ill punches+wack multies destroys ill multies+wack punches...stick with your original style...you gotta focus on the punch and if the multi wants to fit there then let it but dont force it. if it hits hard enough people ignore multis totally. they really only impress newbs.

ha just my two cents...ill peep some of your other shit i didnt mean to imply you were new it just looked like you were
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Old 08-19-04, 11:44 PM   #12
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Voted For: Ice Pick

wordplay metahs tah ice def some parts was choppy but that had no effect on yah verse though i liked how the wordplay was though could use more personals though for both ....
phantom you verse seemed simple compared tah pick's even though i like yours use of decent multis and some metahs his hits just came at yah harder...
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Old 08-20-04, 12:27 AM   #13
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Voted For: Phantom

phantom-good personals and nice play his name, ur punches could have been better but they hit hard enuff and ur flow was good
ice pick-u had some iight punches and personals but ur verse was hard to follow with all the () ' and shit, ur flow could have been better..no hate
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Old 08-20-04, 12:45 AM   #14
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Voted For: Ice Pick

Punches - Ice picks wre more creative and oroginal, made me feel em more..
personals - neither of you had any good personals...
vocab - Ice pick had some nice words that complimented his flow better then phantom..
flow - a tie i guess, flow was on point for both..
structure - phantom had less stretched lines and it was more solid..
Wordplay - Ice pick had more complex and steady rhymes..
overall - ice pick won because of better punches, better rhyme scheme, better vocab and a nice verse overall that over shadowed phantoms..

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