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J DOt 1 16.67%
AutoMATIK™ 5 83.33%
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Old 08-21-04, 01:54 PM   #1
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Was pretty close.... but I didn't like the fact that JD had a few broken lines.. Both were hittin' fairly hard, both had decent flow and structure.. I think ya'll could've came a little harder in those areas.. Was hard to call, but I'ma give this one to Auto... he was a little bit more consistant, and that little bit makes a huge difference in a close battle.. much respect to both of ya'll tho..

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Old 08-21-04, 02:21 PM   #2
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Old 08-21-04, 02:42 PM   #3
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Voted For: AutoMATIK™

Damn I have to give it to you Auto, you took this. Some solid punches in there... J Dots was aight as well... just didn't come acros as hard.

I don't think I'm wrong in thinking J Dot's in my crew so I'm not voting.. just feedbacking
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Old 08-21-04, 02:43 PM   #4
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Guys can you cancel that vote please? I meant to click on feedback but instead clicked on vote... damn... someone sort it out.
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Old 08-21-04, 03:00 PM   #5
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i spit acid, niggas cant stop the wrath of me
i dont need to come fully loaded, i'll win with just half of me
5/10
its a catatrophy, how i autoMATIK'ly merk this coward
but yo 'game's over' like 'flip', its time to hit da showers
4/10
I'll devour ya lost dreams, put you on a merking team
then lyrically rape this dude, get him off of this scene
5/10
Im sick of these mediocre rappers, mainly this dude
He sends one punchline, i'll send him a fistfull
5/10
Your lines are more worn-out then homeless folks shoes
And your brains more dead-weight than killers drinking boo's
4/10
Your not convincing...say that shit in yo head
My verbal scheme's will knock you out, prepare to call up the meds
5/10

Punches were played and simple and ya wordplay wasent really there u could elevate and use some complexity in ya verse and that will make it 10 times better


I Spit Fluently Wit Verbs Drippin From The ‘Veins Like Rain’
Demolishin J DOT Wit Swift Kicks To The Splein ‘Wit Over-Raged Pain’
6/10
Just Watch This Clown … I Beat Niggas With ‘Wide Open Violence’
Your Rhymes Don’t Compare To Mine.Beating Me? You Can ‘Just Die Only Tryin’
6/10
You’re Not An Emcee … Im Too Brutal I Beat Niggas and Steal ‘Triple The Heist’
‘I’ll Ripple Ya Life’ And Battling Me You’ll Fall Quicker Than ‘Cripples On Ice’
7/10
You’ll Get ‘Wrapped Quick’ When I Make Yo Vision Blurry From My ‘Quick Page’
And You’ll Get Turned Like ‘Back Flips’ When I Reach In Yo Body And Pawn Yo ‘Rib Cage’
5/10
Im Sick You’ll Get Crunched. So The Cops Can Search Yo Body To ‘Find Notes’
You Hot? DOT Will Only Be Felt By Winning A Battle From ‘Blind Votes’ **
8/10

Some punches were played that ive heard a million times but ya wordplay and complexity was alright now ya best drop seen alot better from u but it was enough 2 get the job done
nice structure and choice of vocab
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