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5 | 55.56% |
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4 | 44.44% |
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08-29-04, 04:17 PM
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I'ont kno y I don't have a post vote spot on the screen, but I don't. So the v goes 2 BP cause he had better flow, harder hittin punches, multis, metas, openr too. Par got him in the closer and in structure, but the struc. is cause u can't really tell with that small ass box ta drop ya verse in. n e how the v goes 2 BP aight -1-
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08-25-04, 09:34 PM
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Miss Me?
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Voted For: Paramik
V/ Paramik He didnt come stretched...so it read better...punches connected and were delivered well....funny meta's that hit hard....more complex verse...Black was okay but he came way too stretched... both of yah need to not "use" "quotes"....lol Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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08-26-04, 12:18 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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Voted For: Paramik
yo dis goes to paramik n heres how Paramik- had good strcuture but u need to stop wi tthe paragragh thing dawwg, umwordplay 7/10, vocab 7/10 struc 6/10, flo 8/10, punches 6/10 the black plague- u had good metas n u had those punches but it broke down like this wordplay 6/10, vocab 8/10, struc 7/10 flo 4/10 n den punches 5/10 v/paramik yalll return da votes Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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08-26-04, 07:12 PM
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Bonecrushing Nigga
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IP:
upping please vote honestly
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08-26-04, 09:16 PM
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Voted For: Paramik
i gotta give this ta para he had more original punches n his structure was more consistent some decent lines from both bp your opener was kinda played but the rest of your verse was pretty decent jus was'nt feeling it as much as para's personal plays off your name.....close battle but my vote goes ta para Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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08-26-04, 10:03 PM
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Voted For: Paramik
lol, this was a funny battle: Para: Your shyt was funny as hell, better struc, not strectched, and just had alot bettere punches... Black: basicly, u need to do better on everything..punches, structure, and u shoould try doing prsonoals next time.... vote: paramik plz return honest vote: Crew Battle: Class Sic Vs. L.R.I. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=144972 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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08-27-04, 09:38 PM
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Bonecrushing Nigga
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IP:
please vote upping 3 or 4
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08-27-04, 10:02 PM
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Voted For: Paramik
paramik had itcuz his punchlines were harder and he had good personals... structure is ok.... BP yo had weak punches dude and yo structure was off... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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08-28-04, 01:58 PM
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Bonecrushing Nigga
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IP:
Upping 4 please vote
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08-29-04, 12:58 PM
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Voted For: The Black Plague
Paramik structure is good.. flow is on target.. u had a few multis.. wordplay was decent,at best.. some of it was played, some of it just sucked.. a few of ur punches connected.. decent personals.. The Black Plague structure isnt very good.. most of ur lines were stretched.. flow fell off due to the stretchness.. good multis.. wordplay was dope.. a few of ur punches connected.. personals were alright.. Overall Paramik had the better structure.. and the more stable flow.. both had decent personals.. both had a few connecting punches.. The Black Plague had more multis.. and better wordplay.. so basing off of that.. The Black Plague gets my vote for a better overall verse.. VOTE - THE BLACK PLAGUE |
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08-29-04, 02:39 PM
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Bonecrushing Nigga
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IP:
you can't vote your in my crew IDIOT LOL JP but you cant vote
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08-29-04, 03:12 PM
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... I Dont Hate...
I Speak The Truth
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IP:
^^ He's in my crew too... We are all in the same crew, so it don't matter if he votes
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08-29-04, 04:22 PM
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Voted For: Paramik
The Black Plague-nice verse. your structure was off, flow was coo, punches coulda been better but they were still good.you put some personals in their that were ok. some lines were kinda self glorification tho. metas were ehh. work on the structure a lil more and the punches a lil more.....7/10 Paramik-structure was real nice, punches were tight, overall nice. but the personal about bp connect was weak as fuck, i know it had potential but just didnt connect at all. metas were coo, wordplay was coo, basically only won because of slightly better punches....7.5/10 yall both know you can do better. RTF..links in the sig. v//paramik
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08-30-04, 07:22 AM
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THE COUNCIL
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This was feedback posted for Paramik
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Nice battle both of ya .
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08-30-04, 02:06 PM
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Voted For: Paramik
Paramik wins...killed it with some ight personals and better punches....BP had some played ish and wasn't as dope Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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